DISCLAIMER:

I AM NOT A CRITIC, I AM JUST A NORMAL READER WHO WILL HELP YOU WITH HOW A READER LIKES YOUR STORY

Profile Pic: Very artistic and cute, matches the story well ♥. I need to check out this graphic shop :D

Comment: The Foreword was Daebak in appearance, I'd say. Everything was neat and clean. Well organized, pastel, and girly. I like songs were added in there, a trailer, quote and gif's of the characters, heck even an ending banner!!!! Everything is fine, that it gives you the feel of a well-planned,well-written story that will very likely to be either super cute or super sad. It didn't disappoint me: the story does have a angsty feeling to it.

After saying all the good things, I have to say the bad part of it. The Foreword where the Plot summery is. In the Plot Summery, writer should write what the main theme of the story is without telling the readers how the whole story will go. The readers needs to guess what is happening or going to happen. That's the only way to keep readers interested. After I read the Plot summery, I knew exactly how the story is going to go. That's not right. I would suggest rewriting the plot summery, so that people would know it is a angsty love story but not EVERYTHING that's coming up. That's just the author to know.

The story itself is very fast pace. There is not much explanation of the characters but the conversations gives enough hints to make readers understand who is talking. Because there is not really much paragraph to read, it is really easy to follow. Chapters are fun sized, so it's fun to read :D 

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LOVE'S MELODY

by 

Eunrix

So that's all i had to say about it.

If I had hurt you, I am sorry.

I just want you to know what A reader thinks.

:)