It was YOU!!

Just Keep SMILING~
 

 

It was a dark and stormy night. Jenny was pacing back and forth, trying to figure out who had done it.
 
"Someone has killed Mr. Simple, question is: Who did it?" Jenny stated her opening line
 
"Since the doors are locked and the crime happened not too long ago..." Lola said
 
"The perpetrator must still be in this house!" Tiffannii continued
 
"Alright then, who is in this house exactly?" Jinyo asked
 
"If I'm correct, it should be the SM Family" Tessa answered
 
"What's going on?" Yesung asked as he entered the room
 
"Someone murdered Mr. Simple" Lani told him in a serious tone
 
"And we need to find out who" Sohee added
 
"Where was he murdered?" Yesung asked, getting into his 'detective' mode
 
"Upstairs, in the bathroom" Mika told him
 
"Talk to Taeyeon, she was upstairs when this happened" Yesung said
 
So, the girls of SMILE, plus Yesung, went upstairs to investigate. When they saw Taeyeon, Jenny casually made her way over to her and started asking questions.
 
"Taeyeon, did you hear about Mr. Simple?" she asked her
 
"Yes I did. I saw him go into the bathroom but he never came out" Taeyeon told her
 
“I see…” Jenny mumbled
 
“Then I saw Krystal walking suspiciously towards the bathroom” Taeyeon followed up
 
“Thanks for telling me this” Jenny said and walked away
 
Jenny then reported to the group of what Taeyeon just told her. Minkyu then made her way towards Krystal while the others were staying back.
 
 
~~~~~~~*****~~~~~*****~~~~~~~
 
 
“MR. SIMPLE IS DEAD?!?!?!” Leeteuk screamed
 
“How could you miss that?!” Minkyu shouted back
 
“It’s not my fault” Leeteuk pouted
 
“Anyways, Jenny’s been doing some investigating and we think it’s a SNSD member that committed the murder” Minkyu told him
 
“I see…” Leeteuk mumbled
 
“Everyone’s been saying that!” Minkyu complained and walked away
 
Leeteuk just stared at her like she was a crazy person. He just shrugged and walked towards Eunhyuk.
 
“Who do you think did it?” he asked
 
“What are you talking about?” Eunhyuk seemed suspicious
 
“Mr. Simple”
 
Eunhyuk’s eyes widened, “I know nothing about it” he replied a little too fast
 
“Sure, whatever you say~” Leeteuk sarcastically replied
 
“I didn’t do anything~” Eunhyuk pouted
 
 
~~~~~~~*****~~~~~*****~~~~~~~
 
 
Sohee and Amber were in the basement, trying to get away from the “investigation” but luck was not on their side.
 
“What do you guys know about Mr. Simple?” Jonghyun asked them
 
“Nothing at all” they both replied
 
“You sure? You two seem the most suspicious” Jonghyun pondered
 
“If we did kill him, don’t you think we would be gone?” Sohee said
 
Jonghyun stared at her for a few moments, “Good point”
 
“Now go bother someone else” Amber said
 
“So rude…” he mumbled before leaving them alone
 
 
~~~~~~~*****~~~~~*****~~~~~~~
 
 
“From all of the clues I’ve gathered…” Jonghyun made a dramatic pause, “IT WAS YOU!!”
 
“So you figured it out huh?” the person smirked
 
“By the way you were looking at Mr. Simple, I would say you were in love with the guy but you were afraid your boyfriend would get mad at you and would want to break up. So you took the led pipe and done Mr. Simple in so you wouldn’t have to worry about your boyfriend breaking up with you” Jonghyun finished his speech
 
“I honestly have no idea what you just said… but you were way off” Lani replied
 
Jonghyun smirked, trying to hide the fact that he looked like an idiot. “I knew that, I was just practicing my accusation”
 
“Sure, let’s go with that” Tessa sarcastically said
 
Jenny was just sitting in the room, observing everyone. Within a few minutes, she figured it out. She put all of the clues together and came up with this. “It was YOU
 
“How did you know?” the person asked in a dark tone
 
“It was pretty obvious since Mr. Simple was in love with your ex-girlfriend” Jenny stated
 
“That doesn’t prove anything!”
 
“Yes it does” Jenny started, “You are still in love with your ex and you wanted to take her current boyfriend out of the picture. The moment she broke up with you was the moment your world ended. You couldn’t stand the heartbreak so you took the liberty of killing anyone that was in love with her… and that anybody was Mr. Simple”
 
“Dammit” the guy muttered
 
“Face it, you still love her, she was your heart and soul… but you did something that screwed up your relationship bad. And that caused her to go to Mr. Simple. Since you still have strong feelings for her, you took action and killed Mr. Simple in hopes of her going back to you” Jenny continued
 
The guy seemed calm, “How can you read me like a book?”
 
“Simple… love makes you do crazy things” Jenny simply told him
 
“I can’t believe I let her go that easily” he said
 
Jenny was about to call his name…
 
 
 
 
 
“YO~ OH GREAT AND POWERFULLY LAZY LEADER, IREONA!!!!”
 
Jenny woke up to all of the members screaming outside her door. ‘I know who it is now’  she thought as she rushed out of her room to confront the person.
 
 
 
 
Since my internet was being a yesterday... I updated today
 
Well I started writing this in my Web Page class and put it in my email so I can finish it at home... but the internet was a so it was delayed a day.
 
Anywho, who do you think did it? It was ______ in the Bathroom with the Led Pipe!
 
(Brownie points to those who know what game that's from!)
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lalalalala #1
Chapter 46: your drawing is amazing as usual btw..
lalalalala #2
Chapter 46: Im soooo excited with their comeback..
-jiral #3
Chapter 46: ahh this is so cute xD and I would like individual pictures of Mika please ^^
lalalalala #4
Chapter 45: gaaaaaahhh....cuteeee
iRoveMi
#5
Chapter 44: Im so sorry i havent been commenting lately D:
Been quite a silent reader <>
But the long chapters are great :) Keep updating !
And favourite part? Minhyuk's and Chen's nervousness over the calls ? :) hehe
-jiral #6
Chapter 42: omg the poster is so cute ;; I seriously agree with Mika on being lazy to say two syllables xD hahaha I can't wait for their comeback and such <3
lalalalala #7
Chapter 41: Waaaaa...cant wait for the next update..^^
-jiral #8
Chapter 41: this chapter is so gbdfukgr YAY EXO HAD THEIR SHOWCASE \O/
iRoveMi
#9
Chapter 39: this chapter is so so cute \o/
And heres a belated CONGRATULATIONS *throws confetti*
keep updating \o/ so glad youre continuing this story <3