MRSLEE
Graphic Review Archive
First Impressions: [8.5/10]
at first glance what i thought (sometimes unedited thoughts
and how my mind works when i first look)
i like this new sort of style from you!
i dont think ive ever seen you make something like this before.
i dont think ive seen it from anyone actually.
so loads of props to you. quite original.
it reminds me of harry potter LOL
how the characters are placed,
like the house banners hanging on a wall works very well
especially in this vertical poster,
i love how simple it looks; it goes perfect with the fresh and clean feel.
i feel like its missing something though.
something strong to make it memorable.
i cant explain what that is though >_<
credits alice zhang
Technique: [20/20]
how masterful are you at blending/cutting
blending looks perfect. the bottom on each character transitions smoothly
into their "banner" or technically to me the banner looks like its covering them nicely
not much to say about it. no problems here.
Resources: [19/20]
does your images/stocks/brushes/textures enhance the poster
images used are good. i like how they all match. clothing wise.
lol its always a pet peeve of mine. if someone wearing a winter coat
and another one in shorts, i feel they shouldnt be together.
i like how your images and stocks all fit the wintery mood. quality is good.
the bokeh light effects are a nice touch. i like that they are in multiple colors.
it kind of bothers me that they are over the character's faces though.
a little on the side or in their hair is fine, but on their face is too distracting for me.
Composition: [18.5/20]
did you create an eye catching and balanced piece
how well does your piece "flow"
the composition is good. the images connect well.
i like how they were chosen and placed.
i like how the girl in the center is facing center.
but i would have added an extra shoulder or two.
she looks kinda stuffy and blank in her chest.
i like how the left guys is slightly turned left,
and the right guy slightly turned right.
i would have liked the girl to be slightly lowered
so that all their eye levels are aligned.
when my eyes move across
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