MRSLEE

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First Impressions: [8.5/10]
at first glance what i thought (sometimes unedited thoughts
and how my mind works when i first look)
i like this new sort of style from you!
i dont think ive ever seen you make something like this before.
i dont think ive seen it from anyone actually.
so loads of props to you. quite original.
it reminds me of harry potter LOL
how the characters are placed,
like the house banners hanging on a wall works very well
especially in this vertical poster,
i love how simple it looks; it goes perfect with the fresh and clean feel.
i feel like its missing something though. 
something strong to make it memorable.
i cant explain what that is though >_<

credits alice zhang
 

Technique: [20/20]
how masterful are you at blending/cutting
blending looks perfect. the bottom on each character transitions smoothly
into their "banner"  or technically to me the banner looks like its covering them nicely
not much to say about it.  no problems here.
 

Resources: [19/20]
does your images/stocks/brushes/textures enhance the poster
images used are good. i like how they all match. clothing wise.
lol its always a pet peeve of mine. if someone wearing a winter coat 
and another one in shorts, i feel they shouldnt be together.
i like how your images and stocks all fit the wintery mood. quality is good.
the bokeh light effects are a nice touch. i like that they are in multiple colors.
it kind of bothers me that they are over the character's faces though.
a little on the side or in their hair is fine, but on their face is too distracting for me.
 

Composition: [18.5/20]

did you create an eye catching and balanced piece
how well does your piece "flow"
the composition is good. the images connect well. 
i like how they were chosen and placed.
i like how the girl in the center is facing center.
but i would have added an extra shoulder or two.
she looks kinda stuffy and blank in her chest.
i like how the left guys is slightly turned left,
and the right guy slightly turned right.
i would have liked the girl to be slightly lowered
so that all their eye levels are aligned.
when my eyes move across

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BunniesOnTheMoon
#1
Chapter 50: Sorry for the late comment bb! Thank you for the review! I wasn't too sure on this one, and I started doubting myself after I sent it in, but I guess I should be more confident because you thought it was interesting ^^
I do admit I oversharpenined this a bit more than I should XD The pictures used were fuzzy after I resized and I overcompensated by sharpening too much OTL
<3
SapphireQueen #2
Chapter 41: oh no :c
you are my favorite reviewer <3
well, always supporting :D
Stargawn #3
Chapter 41: Nooooo!! :"( that makes me really sad. I really liked the way you reviewed. I think you're the best reviewer I know here and you're one of my favorite designers too ^_^
Oh well...it's understandable. I wish you good luck with your other things=]
ChibiMusicStar
#4
Chapter 41: awww too bad >.<
Your reviews are awesome and you are one of my fav designer + reviewer. Good luck in your studies and graphic skills :D
vanivici #5
Chapter 41: Awww too bad!
I really like your way reviewing a poster. C:
Andd you're one of my fav designer , and i think you are the best reviewer out there! XDD hahaha
Goodluck for your another things then! <3
teaquiIa #6
would you like to be an affies? c:
a graphic review shop, `( gleaming sunset; www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/243077
CoolerThanYou #7
Poster Link : http://i4.minus.com/ixFyisXJUkTnT.jpg
theme/mood : angst, mistery
story link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/406486/his-dark-side-originalcharacter-exo-kai
any difficulties : I have problems on choosing fonts. I hope you can help me on that :D
Program used : photoshop cs5
Any other comment : Thank you :D
ChibiMusicStar
#8
poster link:http://i.imgur.com/gvvu9cX.png
theme/mood of story:romcance and sad
story link: n/a
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties:
Hmm i overuse blending at Jessica and the stock was kinda blurred right? So basically i want to try something new and fresh. Ohh i have problem with the placement of stocks and fonts :D
program used: Gimp :D
any other comments: Vanessa is the coolest XD
Soshiss
#9
poster link:
theme/mood of story:
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/387184/loveplayer-you-exo-exom-luhan
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties: i hope to archieve is to blend some colors together with the used of textures (: Diffulties? Hard to find a suitable texture.
program used: Gimp...
any other comments: nope