FutureEtoile

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First Impressions: [10/10]
at first glance what i thought (sometimes unedited thoughts
and how my mind works when i first look)
my first impressions of this poster is pretty positive.
its a nice cute simple poster. the small details added are good and fit well.
ok not much else to say about it so ill continue with the review
 

Technique: [20/20]
how masterful are you at blending/cutting
the cutting is very good. its pretty near perfect. 
all the cuts are smooth and sharp.
im not sure if the red flower on the right is cut or not,
but its a bit blurry and could use some sharpening to match the rest of the piece.
nothing much to say here.
 

Resources: [18/20]
does your images/stocks/brushes/textures enhance the poster
the images themselves are good and suitable.
quality is good. i like that you used a blank faced girl for this.
however looking at this poster. I wouldnt know that she is missing a heart.
i think you could have tried to add something to help get the message across.
maybe thats what the robot and the hearts are for, but if I didnt read the description
i wouldnt think that. i would have guessed oh maybe someone is an android,
or a super nerd or a scientist.  using a stock could have helped here.
maybe like a sign that says "missing heart reward:$" or something else.
i like the other elements added here, it gives it a scrapbook kind of feel.
i also like how you kept their faces clear to help keep viewers focus.
 

Composition: [18/20]

did you create an eye catching and balanced piece
how well does your piece "flow"
the composition is good. i like h

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BunniesOnTheMoon
#1
Chapter 50: Sorry for the late comment bb! Thank you for the review! I wasn't too sure on this one, and I started doubting myself after I sent it in, but I guess I should be more confident because you thought it was interesting ^^
I do admit I oversharpenined this a bit more than I should XD The pictures used were fuzzy after I resized and I overcompensated by sharpening too much OTL
<3
SapphireQueen #2
Chapter 41: oh no :c
you are my favorite reviewer <3
well, always supporting :D
Stargawn #3
Chapter 41: Nooooo!! :"( that makes me really sad. I really liked the way you reviewed. I think you're the best reviewer I know here and you're one of my favorite designers too ^_^
Oh well...it's understandable. I wish you good luck with your other things=]
ChibiMusicStar
#4
Chapter 41: awww too bad >.<
Your reviews are awesome and you are one of my fav designer + reviewer. Good luck in your studies and graphic skills :D
vanivici #5
Chapter 41: Awww too bad!
I really like your way reviewing a poster. C:
Andd you're one of my fav designer , and i think you are the best reviewer out there! XDD hahaha
Goodluck for your another things then! <3
teaquiIa #6
would you like to be an affies? c:
a graphic review shop, `( gleaming sunset; www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/243077
CoolerThanYou #7
Poster Link : http://i4.minus.com/ixFyisXJUkTnT.jpg
theme/mood : angst, mistery
story link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/406486/his-dark-side-originalcharacter-exo-kai
any difficulties : I have problems on choosing fonts. I hope you can help me on that :D
Program used : photoshop cs5
Any other comment : Thank you :D
ChibiMusicStar
#8
poster link:http://i.imgur.com/gvvu9cX.png
theme/mood of story:romcance and sad
story link: n/a
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties:
Hmm i overuse blending at Jessica and the stock was kinda blurred right? So basically i want to try something new and fresh. Ohh i have problem with the placement of stocks and fonts :D
program used: Gimp :D
any other comments: Vanessa is the coolest XD
Soshiss
#9
poster link:
theme/mood of story:
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/387184/loveplayer-you-exo-exom-luhan
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties: i hope to archieve is to blend some colors together with the used of textures (: Diffulties? Hard to find a suitable texture.
program used: Gimp...
any other comments: nope