Sadistic Sinner

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First Impressions: [8/10]
at first glance what i thought (sometimes unedited thoughts
and how my mind works when i first look)
i like it :) lol sorry theres nothing else that
particularily strikes me as first impressions go.
so on with the rest of the review.
 

Technique: [19/20]
how masterful are you at blending/cutting
blending is great. between both guys
theres no random arm or leg sticking out or cut offs.
the blending could be a weeeee bit better
where yunho and the flower stock meet though.
just a little smoother would have been nice to see.
but i know how hard it is since his shirt is so dark.
If you used layer mask to blend
(which is the mehod i personally love to use)
or brushed some white spots of top
a slight gaussian blur would have helped.

 

Resources: [14/20]
does your images/stocks/brushes/textures enhance the poster
i like that you used textures and stocks. the textures and stocks you chose do look nice how they are. 
and they used well but relating this to theme/mood i think your choice in resources could be improved.
for instance, right now i can't tell what this piece is suppose to be.
if i didnt read any text, i would think its happy because the colors are sort of cheerful.
if i read the title i sort of think its sad.
if i read the subtext I think its hopeful/nostalgic.
your choice in resources can help define the mood and message better.
even if this isnt a story, i think art in general should have a story or make the viewer feel something.
ill explain some more in the mood section.
the piece looks over sharpened to me, with makes it seem like the quality of the textures/images you chose were low, 
and might bring down the piece a bit. so be careful of over sharpening.
 

Composition: [19/20]

did you create an eye catching and balanced piece
how well does your piece "flow"
the main composition of the piece is simple and
easy to understand (which is not a b

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BunniesOnTheMoon
#1
Chapter 50: Sorry for the late comment bb! Thank you for the review! I wasn't too sure on this one, and I started doubting myself after I sent it in, but I guess I should be more confident because you thought it was interesting ^^
I do admit I oversharpenined this a bit more than I should XD The pictures used were fuzzy after I resized and I overcompensated by sharpening too much OTL
<3
SapphireQueen #2
Chapter 41: oh no :c
you are my favorite reviewer <3
well, always supporting :D
Stargawn #3
Chapter 41: Nooooo!! :"( that makes me really sad. I really liked the way you reviewed. I think you're the best reviewer I know here and you're one of my favorite designers too ^_^
Oh well...it's understandable. I wish you good luck with your other things=]
ChibiMusicStar
#4
Chapter 41: awww too bad >.<
Your reviews are awesome and you are one of my fav designer + reviewer. Good luck in your studies and graphic skills :D
vanivici #5
Chapter 41: Awww too bad!
I really like your way reviewing a poster. C:
Andd you're one of my fav designer , and i think you are the best reviewer out there! XDD hahaha
Goodluck for your another things then! <3
teaquiIa #6
would you like to be an affies? c:
a graphic review shop, `( gleaming sunset; www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/243077
CoolerThanYou #7
Poster Link : http://i4.minus.com/ixFyisXJUkTnT.jpg
theme/mood : angst, mistery
story link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/406486/his-dark-side-originalcharacter-exo-kai
any difficulties : I have problems on choosing fonts. I hope you can help me on that :D
Program used : photoshop cs5
Any other comment : Thank you :D
ChibiMusicStar
#8
poster link:http://i.imgur.com/gvvu9cX.png
theme/mood of story:romcance and sad
story link: n/a
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties:
Hmm i overuse blending at Jessica and the stock was kinda blurred right? So basically i want to try something new and fresh. Ohh i have problem with the placement of stocks and fonts :D
program used: Gimp :D
any other comments: Vanessa is the coolest XD
Soshiss
#9
poster link:
theme/mood of story:
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/387184/loveplayer-you-exo-exom-luhan
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties: i hope to archieve is to blend some colors together with the used of textures (: Diffulties? Hard to find a suitable texture.
program used: Gimp...
any other comments: nope