SapphireQueen

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First Impressions: [9/10]
at first glance what i thought (sometimes unedited thoughts
and how my mind works when i first look)
ooh look at this. fancy gif,
trying to make me feel old and lame
cause i cant do this huh lol
i kids. but i like how you used it. 
its not just there "Cause you can do it"
it has a reaosn for being there - to rotate the text.
i like the poster. i dont think many people do this style anymore.
it used to be LOADS LOADS popular around.....2006?
lol my age is showing. 
 

Technique: [18/20]
how masterful are you at blending/cutting
blending is done well. there are some minor spots that could use improving.
see the spots i circled in red.
since the two guys on the outside are wearing patterns, 
you have to be more careful about how you blend them, 
so that they aren't overflowing onto the other character.
try to blur the "ends" of them to make it blend in more smoothly.

Resources: [18/20]
does your images/stocks/brushes/textures enhance the poster
images used are good, the quality is good and they match the mood well, 
which ill explain in more detail later in the other section.
the texture is great, not just the type of texture used,
but also this particular texture is a good choice.
it looks like its encircling the characters in a firey glow.
maybe make the texture a bit more vibrant.
i think you should have moved the texture over to the left a bit to
include the guy on the left. he looks lonely there.
i really love parts of the background as well.
i like the pattern and the woodsy looking part.
the background looks a tad unbalanced though. 
see the parts i circled in blue. the top is wood.
the bottom one half is the pattern, and one half is sorta blank.
i would try to make it more cohesive and blend the backgroudns together a bit.
i like how you kept the top wood and none on bottom, 
maybe try to extend the pattern to the top and erase some parts.
i like how you kept the faces clear and unobstructed.
 

Composition: [20/20]

did you create an eye catching and balanced piece
how well does your piece "flow"
the composition is very good. the images connect well.
i like how each character is facing a certain angle.
i like how you placed them around the top left corner.
and i like how you added the fractal texture as another area of focus.
which does well to bring

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sorry ive sort of neglected this ahaha but it takes me at least a solid hour to do one! and i dont like starting and stopping so i need to find some down time

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BunniesOnTheMoon
#1
Chapter 50: Sorry for the late comment bb! Thank you for the review! I wasn't too sure on this one, and I started doubting myself after I sent it in, but I guess I should be more confident because you thought it was interesting ^^
I do admit I oversharpenined this a bit more than I should XD The pictures used were fuzzy after I resized and I overcompensated by sharpening too much OTL
<3
SapphireQueen #2
Chapter 41: oh no :c
you are my favorite reviewer <3
well, always supporting :D
Stargawn #3
Chapter 41: Nooooo!! :"( that makes me really sad. I really liked the way you reviewed. I think you're the best reviewer I know here and you're one of my favorite designers too ^_^
Oh well...it's understandable. I wish you good luck with your other things=]
ChibiMusicStar
#4
Chapter 41: awww too bad >.<
Your reviews are awesome and you are one of my fav designer + reviewer. Good luck in your studies and graphic skills :D
vanivici #5
Chapter 41: Awww too bad!
I really like your way reviewing a poster. C:
Andd you're one of my fav designer , and i think you are the best reviewer out there! XDD hahaha
Goodluck for your another things then! <3
teaquiIa #6
would you like to be an affies? c:
a graphic review shop, `( gleaming sunset; www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/243077
CoolerThanYou #7
Poster Link : http://i4.minus.com/ixFyisXJUkTnT.jpg
theme/mood : angst, mistery
story link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/406486/his-dark-side-originalcharacter-exo-kai
any difficulties : I have problems on choosing fonts. I hope you can help me on that :D
Program used : photoshop cs5
Any other comment : Thank you :D
ChibiMusicStar
#8
poster link:http://i.imgur.com/gvvu9cX.png
theme/mood of story:romcance and sad
story link: n/a
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties:
Hmm i overuse blending at Jessica and the stock was kinda blurred right? So basically i want to try something new and fresh. Ohh i have problem with the placement of stocks and fonts :D
program used: Gimp :D
any other comments: Vanessa is the coolest XD
Soshiss
#9
poster link:
theme/mood of story:
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/387184/loveplayer-you-exo-exom-luhan
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties: i hope to archieve is to blend some colors together with the used of textures (: Diffulties? Hard to find a suitable texture.
program used: Gimp...
any other comments: nope