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First Impressions: [6/10]
at first glance what i thought (sometimes unedited thoughts
and how my mind works when i first look)
ok. i like the flowery one, but if i were going to pick.
its an easy choice. i would pick the more brown toned one.
since its an angst / murder mystery that is the one i think matches the most.
pink goes right out when i decide. pink in murder doesnt seem that angst-y.
when i first see it, my impression is just ehh.
its ok, not fantastic. would i know what the story is about? nope.
 

Technique: [16/20]
how masterful are you at blending/cutting
the cutting is not bad. i know its probably annoying doing the outline
but i think adding more details to their silhouette would have enhanced the piece quite a lot.
right now they just look like blobs. adding some more distinct features would be great.
like some space for arm holes or legs or something.
cause when i look at it my eye just sees a blob.
 

Resources: [17/20]
does your images/stocks/brushes/textures enhance the poster
yup it must have been annoying to deal with just silhouettes
but i think you could have used more stocks / textures to your advantage
to help tell the story better. for instance, theres nothing on the poster that would
let viewers know its about murder.
maybe have a character or two hold a knife.
i like that you tried to use the clock but maybe a different one would be better
since i mentioned before the flowery bits dont match the mood.
 

Composition: [16/20]

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BunniesOnTheMoon
#1
Chapter 50: Sorry for the late comment bb! Thank you for the review! I wasn't too sure on this one, and I started doubting myself after I sent it in, but I guess I should be more confident because you thought it was interesting ^^
I do admit I oversharpenined this a bit more than I should XD The pictures used were fuzzy after I resized and I overcompensated by sharpening too much OTL
<3
SapphireQueen #2
Chapter 41: oh no :c
you are my favorite reviewer <3
well, always supporting :D
Stargawn #3
Chapter 41: Nooooo!! :"( that makes me really sad. I really liked the way you reviewed. I think you're the best reviewer I know here and you're one of my favorite designers too ^_^
Oh well...it's understandable. I wish you good luck with your other things=]
ChibiMusicStar
#4
Chapter 41: awww too bad >.<
Your reviews are awesome and you are one of my fav designer + reviewer. Good luck in your studies and graphic skills :D
vanivici #5
Chapter 41: Awww too bad!
I really like your way reviewing a poster. C:
Andd you're one of my fav designer , and i think you are the best reviewer out there! XDD hahaha
Goodluck for your another things then! <3
teaquiIa #6
would you like to be an affies? c:
a graphic review shop, `( gleaming sunset; www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/243077
CoolerThanYou #7
Poster Link : http://i4.minus.com/ixFyisXJUkTnT.jpg
theme/mood : angst, mistery
story link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/406486/his-dark-side-originalcharacter-exo-kai
any difficulties : I have problems on choosing fonts. I hope you can help me on that :D
Program used : photoshop cs5
Any other comment : Thank you :D
ChibiMusicStar
#8
poster link:http://i.imgur.com/gvvu9cX.png
theme/mood of story:romcance and sad
story link: n/a
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties:
Hmm i overuse blending at Jessica and the stock was kinda blurred right? So basically i want to try something new and fresh. Ohh i have problem with the placement of stocks and fonts :D
program used: Gimp :D
any other comments: Vanessa is the coolest XD
Soshiss
#9
poster link:
theme/mood of story:
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/387184/loveplayer-you-exo-exom-luhan
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties: i hope to archieve is to blend some colors together with the used of textures (: Diffulties? Hard to find a suitable texture.
program used: Gimp...
any other comments: nope