Sadistic Sinner

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First Impressions: [10/10]
at first glance what i thought (sometimes unedited thoughts
and how my mind works when i first look)
first as a side comment i must comment about your user name.
i find it super funny since my boyfriends calls me a sadist sometimes.
sorry. im sort of weird. ok the review.
for my first glance i really liked it. the color scheme and the composition are eye catching.
 

Technique: [19/20]
how masterful are you at blending/cutting
the blending is pretty good. since its dark it sort of hides well.
and since its a simple poster the "bad" blending spots I kind of like.
like where is shoulder, waist and hands are, the bricks/road/or texture visible.
it gives it a "cracked" look. if it were anything except in this case though
i would definitely say that it would lower the overall quality of the piece.
since you said you think your blending could be improved,
i will refer you to this link. it has some tips
that might be useful even though you may not use this method.
http://flying-high.co.nr/tutorial01.php
 

Resources: [18/20]
does your images/stocks/brushes/textures enhance the poster
the images themselves are good and suitable.
quality is good. i like how there is just enough resources used
in terms of making a nice looking piece and nothing is over done.
i like the skull and the textures.
what i think could be improved is that the poster should try to tell a story.
even when there is no story, when a viewer looks at it they should be able to 
understand the message that youre sending out.
this area seems like its lacking a bit. 
you said the poster is displaying horror.
but from what i could see it might just be sad and dealing with a death.
other stocks or a different choice of images could help with this.
the guy looks too neutral for me. I do like how he is positioned but
i dont think it adds enough to your poster.
maybe he's looking away because death is creeping up on him?
a more dramatic poster using a variance of resources could help.
ill explain a bit more about the theme below.
 

Composition: [18.5/20]

did you create an eye catching and balanced piece
how well does your piec

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BunniesOnTheMoon
#1
Chapter 50: Sorry for the late comment bb! Thank you for the review! I wasn't too sure on this one, and I started doubting myself after I sent it in, but I guess I should be more confident because you thought it was interesting ^^
I do admit I oversharpenined this a bit more than I should XD The pictures used were fuzzy after I resized and I overcompensated by sharpening too much OTL
<3
SapphireQueen #2
Chapter 41: oh no :c
you are my favorite reviewer <3
well, always supporting :D
Stargawn #3
Chapter 41: Nooooo!! :"( that makes me really sad. I really liked the way you reviewed. I think you're the best reviewer I know here and you're one of my favorite designers too ^_^
Oh well...it's understandable. I wish you good luck with your other things=]
ChibiMusicStar
#4
Chapter 41: awww too bad >.<
Your reviews are awesome and you are one of my fav designer + reviewer. Good luck in your studies and graphic skills :D
vanivici #5
Chapter 41: Awww too bad!
I really like your way reviewing a poster. C:
Andd you're one of my fav designer , and i think you are the best reviewer out there! XDD hahaha
Goodluck for your another things then! <3
teaquiIa #6
would you like to be an affies? c:
a graphic review shop, `( gleaming sunset; www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/243077
CoolerThanYou #7
Poster Link : http://i4.minus.com/ixFyisXJUkTnT.jpg
theme/mood : angst, mistery
story link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/406486/his-dark-side-originalcharacter-exo-kai
any difficulties : I have problems on choosing fonts. I hope you can help me on that :D
Program used : photoshop cs5
Any other comment : Thank you :D
ChibiMusicStar
#8
poster link:http://i.imgur.com/gvvu9cX.png
theme/mood of story:romcance and sad
story link: n/a
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties:
Hmm i overuse blending at Jessica and the stock was kinda blurred right? So basically i want to try something new and fresh. Ohh i have problem with the placement of stocks and fonts :D
program used: Gimp :D
any other comments: Vanessa is the coolest XD
Soshiss
#9
poster link:
theme/mood of story:
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/387184/loveplayer-you-exo-exom-luhan
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties: i hope to archieve is to blend some colors together with the used of textures (: Diffulties? Hard to find a suitable texture.
program used: Gimp...
any other comments: nope