HwangAhYoung

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First Impressions: [6/10]
at first glance what i thought (sometimes unedited thoughts
and how my mind works when i first look)
mmm ok this is not for a story. nice idea with the use of the frame.
the colors are just kind of ehh to me. they dont stand out much
since they are all basically in the same family.
its not a bad piece, its just does amaze me.
 

Technique: [20/20]
how masterful are you at blending/cutting
ok well everything looks good here since
not a lot of blended was needed.
cant comment much.

Resources: [13/20]
does your images/stocks/brushes/textures enhance the poster
i like the idea of the frame/mirror whatever it is.
but notice how much "extra" stuff there is on the top?
i feel like its a waste cause nothing can go on top of that spot.
i think using a different frame would be better
just so that youll have more options with the space around it.
maybe something less ornate.
i like the leaves or whatever is in the background on the top right especially.
i do not like that sparkles at all.
i think its a mismatch in mood.
to me sparkes = magical/happy/cheerful
not wicked/evil

i would have liked to see additional resources.
not textures, but i think stocks would have greatly helped your piece.
adding some in the background to further "frame" your focus.
 

Composition: [18/20]

did you create an eye catching and balanced piece
how well does your piece "flow"
the main composition of the piece is simple and
easy to understand (which is not a bad thing).
i would have liked to see some more negative space.
for example: making the frame+ image smaller.
therefore youll have more room to play with text and possibly adding stocks.
i do not like the text placements.
they are hard for me to read.

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sorry ive sort of neglected this ahaha but it takes me at least a solid hour to do one! and i dont like starting and stopping so i need to find some down time

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BunniesOnTheMoon
#1
Chapter 50: Sorry for the late comment bb! Thank you for the review! I wasn't too sure on this one, and I started doubting myself after I sent it in, but I guess I should be more confident because you thought it was interesting ^^
I do admit I oversharpenined this a bit more than I should XD The pictures used were fuzzy after I resized and I overcompensated by sharpening too much OTL
<3
SapphireQueen #2
Chapter 41: oh no :c
you are my favorite reviewer <3
well, always supporting :D
Stargawn #3
Chapter 41: Nooooo!! :"( that makes me really sad. I really liked the way you reviewed. I think you're the best reviewer I know here and you're one of my favorite designers too ^_^
Oh well...it's understandable. I wish you good luck with your other things=]
ChibiMusicStar
#4
Chapter 41: awww too bad >.<
Your reviews are awesome and you are one of my fav designer + reviewer. Good luck in your studies and graphic skills :D
vanivici #5
Chapter 41: Awww too bad!
I really like your way reviewing a poster. C:
Andd you're one of my fav designer , and i think you are the best reviewer out there! XDD hahaha
Goodluck for your another things then! <3
teaquiIa #6
would you like to be an affies? c:
a graphic review shop, `( gleaming sunset; www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/243077
CoolerThanYou #7
Poster Link : http://i4.minus.com/ixFyisXJUkTnT.jpg
theme/mood : angst, mistery
story link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/406486/his-dark-side-originalcharacter-exo-kai
any difficulties : I have problems on choosing fonts. I hope you can help me on that :D
Program used : photoshop cs5
Any other comment : Thank you :D
ChibiMusicStar
#8
poster link:http://i.imgur.com/gvvu9cX.png
theme/mood of story:romcance and sad
story link: n/a
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties:
Hmm i overuse blending at Jessica and the stock was kinda blurred right? So basically i want to try something new and fresh. Ohh i have problem with the placement of stocks and fonts :D
program used: Gimp :D
any other comments: Vanessa is the coolest XD
Soshiss
#9
poster link:
theme/mood of story:
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/387184/loveplayer-you-exo-exom-luhan
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties: i hope to archieve is to blend some colors together with the used of textures (: Diffulties? Hard to find a suitable texture.
program used: Gimp...
any other comments: nope