Critique:

Nice entry you have here! The technical aspects of this are all great so I won't go into depth about it.
What I think can be improved is the composition and mainly choosing a focal point and
developing the rest of your signature around that point. When we see other people we tend to
make eye contact with them, so that translates in graphics. We tend to look straight to the model
that is looking directly at us. So when I see this signature, the first thing I see is the left image,
and I would call that the main focus. However the right image is demanding a lot of attention.
There is more contrast on him, he seems to be in the foreground in front of most elements in