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First Impressions: [7/10]
at first glance what i thought (sometimes unedited thoughts
and how my mind works when i first look)
the first thing i noticed when i see this poster is that
motion blur in between their faces.
it seems like you added that after blending them,
which is a shame cause i think it would look better without it.
to me, motion blur well tries to mimic motion.
so it would be like someone's head is flipping .
ok, other than that. its a nice poster. 
it left me with a general postive impression of it.
 

Technique: [16/20]
how masterful are you at blending/cutting
blending seems good.
i like the blending between the guy and the flowers.
i like the blending at the bottom corner of the girl and the wheat/grass.
there are some spots that could be improved.
the space between the guy and the girl for instance like i mentioned above.
also at his neck, i can see some green from her seat. try to either
blend it out or make the color match by using curves / color balance.
another spot is most of the grass / wheat area. theres almost a whole line going across.
try to blend that out or at the end when your blending is finished, ctrl+alt+shift+e to stamp all visible,
lasso the area and apply a gaussian blur. check out this to get more info.

 

Resources: [18/20]
does your images/stocks/brushes/textures enhance the poster
images are good. quality is good. texture used is good.
stock is good. they work well together and have similar color tones.
i think the bokeh lights are quite big for the piece though.
everything is quite large in relation to each other. their heads are large, 
the title is large, the flower is large. they seem to fight for attention,
so i think making the bokeh smaller would be nice.
maybe an additional texture to give it a little bit more ooomph
would be nice. like a subtle dirty paper texture, or some color adjustments.

 

Composition: [17.5/20]

did you create an eye catching and balanced piece

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BunniesOnTheMoon
#1
Chapter 50: Sorry for the late comment bb! Thank you for the review! I wasn't too sure on this one, and I started doubting myself after I sent it in, but I guess I should be more confident because you thought it was interesting ^^
I do admit I oversharpenined this a bit more than I should XD The pictures used were fuzzy after I resized and I overcompensated by sharpening too much OTL
<3
SapphireQueen #2
Chapter 41: oh no :c
you are my favorite reviewer <3
well, always supporting :D
Stargawn #3
Chapter 41: Nooooo!! :"( that makes me really sad. I really liked the way you reviewed. I think you're the best reviewer I know here and you're one of my favorite designers too ^_^
Oh well...it's understandable. I wish you good luck with your other things=]
ChibiMusicStar
#4
Chapter 41: awww too bad >.<
Your reviews are awesome and you are one of my fav designer + reviewer. Good luck in your studies and graphic skills :D
vanivici #5
Chapter 41: Awww too bad!
I really like your way reviewing a poster. C:
Andd you're one of my fav designer , and i think you are the best reviewer out there! XDD hahaha
Goodluck for your another things then! <3
teaquiIa #6
would you like to be an affies? c:
a graphic review shop, `( gleaming sunset; www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/243077
CoolerThanYou #7
Poster Link : http://i4.minus.com/ixFyisXJUkTnT.jpg
theme/mood : angst, mistery
story link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/406486/his-dark-side-originalcharacter-exo-kai
any difficulties : I have problems on choosing fonts. I hope you can help me on that :D
Program used : photoshop cs5
Any other comment : Thank you :D
ChibiMusicStar
#8
poster link:http://i.imgur.com/gvvu9cX.png
theme/mood of story:romcance and sad
story link: n/a
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties:
Hmm i overuse blending at Jessica and the stock was kinda blurred right? So basically i want to try something new and fresh. Ohh i have problem with the placement of stocks and fonts :D
program used: Gimp :D
any other comments: Vanessa is the coolest XD
Soshiss
#9
poster link:
theme/mood of story:
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/387184/loveplayer-you-exo-exom-luhan
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties: i hope to archieve is to blend some colors together with the used of textures (: Diffulties? Hard to find a suitable texture.
program used: Gimp...
any other comments: nope