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First Impressions: [7/10]
at first glance what i thought (sometimes unedited thoughts
and how my mind works when i first look)
ok its a horror poster. so first thing let's talk about.
does this scare the pants off of me.
nope. sorry. next thing that stuck out when i first saw it.
the the proportions. the canvas looks awkward.
i think it should be taller.
also the size of the girl is super small but the text is really really huge.
its a composition issue and ill explain more below.
other than that its alright. not a bad first impression.
 

Technique: [20/20]
how masterful are you at blending/cutting
blending seems good.
there are no harsh edges around the picture that i can tell.
not sure because if it was like that or not, but from
what i can see its good. so sorry cant comment much on it.

 

Resources: [12/20]
does your images/stocks/brushes/textures enhance the poster
this is a section that i think you could have done a lot with to enhance the poster.
right now its just "ehh". but if you add some more stuff to it,
you can turn it into something that makes people go WOW.
you can add a bunch of things to make it scary/eerie.
blood. paper rips. the moon. guns. knife. the list goes on.
you can add some textures to the piece and give it more dimension.
when i say texture in the sentence above i mean LITERAL texture
like if i look at it, i can imagine running my hand over it and FEELING something.
maybe its the grainy sands or sharp glass pieces. something extra would be good.
the image here is ok. i would have liked to see you take it to the next level with the enhancements i mentioned above.
i like the subtle scratchy texture over the whole piece, I would have liked to see more of it though.
also the white spirals on the top right looks random to me and i rather they not be there.
 

Composition: [14/20]

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BunniesOnTheMoon
#1
Chapter 50: Sorry for the late comment bb! Thank you for the review! I wasn't too sure on this one, and I started doubting myself after I sent it in, but I guess I should be more confident because you thought it was interesting ^^
I do admit I oversharpenined this a bit more than I should XD The pictures used were fuzzy after I resized and I overcompensated by sharpening too much OTL
<3
SapphireQueen #2
Chapter 41: oh no :c
you are my favorite reviewer <3
well, always supporting :D
Stargawn #3
Chapter 41: Nooooo!! :"( that makes me really sad. I really liked the way you reviewed. I think you're the best reviewer I know here and you're one of my favorite designers too ^_^
Oh well...it's understandable. I wish you good luck with your other things=]
ChibiMusicStar
#4
Chapter 41: awww too bad >.<
Your reviews are awesome and you are one of my fav designer + reviewer. Good luck in your studies and graphic skills :D
vanivici #5
Chapter 41: Awww too bad!
I really like your way reviewing a poster. C:
Andd you're one of my fav designer , and i think you are the best reviewer out there! XDD hahaha
Goodluck for your another things then! <3
teaquiIa #6
would you like to be an affies? c:
a graphic review shop, `( gleaming sunset; www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/243077
CoolerThanYou #7
Poster Link : http://i4.minus.com/ixFyisXJUkTnT.jpg
theme/mood : angst, mistery
story link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/406486/his-dark-side-originalcharacter-exo-kai
any difficulties : I have problems on choosing fonts. I hope you can help me on that :D
Program used : photoshop cs5
Any other comment : Thank you :D
ChibiMusicStar
#8
poster link:http://i.imgur.com/gvvu9cX.png
theme/mood of story:romcance and sad
story link: n/a
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties:
Hmm i overuse blending at Jessica and the stock was kinda blurred right? So basically i want to try something new and fresh. Ohh i have problem with the placement of stocks and fonts :D
program used: Gimp :D
any other comments: Vanessa is the coolest XD
Soshiss
#9
poster link:
theme/mood of story:
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/387184/loveplayer-you-exo-exom-luhan
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties: i hope to archieve is to blend some colors together with the used of textures (: Diffulties? Hard to find a suitable texture.
program used: Gimp...
any other comments: nope