First Impressions: [9/10]
at first glance what i thought (sometimes unedited thoughts
and how my mind works when i first look)
my first impressions of this poster is pretty positive.
its a nice cute simple poster. it looks good but is too light for me.
there arent any dark dark colors in the piece which i think its missing.
their hair for example, where there is suppose to be black for the shadows, its greyed out.
i think it could use some contrast (ex curves) just a bit to get more shadows on their faces and etc.
 

Technique: [20/20]
how masterful are you at blending/cutting
the cutting is very good. its pretty near perfect for the characters. 
all the cuts are smooth and sharp.
cant really go into depth about it lol.
another thing that is sort of related, the white bit behind the title, 
to me its suppose to be like a marker or brush ? 
so the drop shadow behind it makes the bottom look blurry.
i would say either sharpening that up (using brightness and contrast maybe) 
 

Resources: [14/20]
does your images/stocks/brushes/textures enhance the poster
the images themselves are good and suitable.
quality is good. i think here is where you could have added more to make the poster really shine.
like choosing stocks and other items that relate to the story.
maybe place them in a living room or house setting. 
example of a poster that uses more props and stuff and creates a setting:

credits MRSLEE

 

Composition: [19.5/20]

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