NielAhn

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First Impressions: [7/10]
at first glance what i thought (sometimes unedited thoughts
and how my mind works when i first look)
the first thing i noticed when i see this poster, is the speck on his face.
seems like he gots a bruise. anyways, its a nice poster.
it doesnt scream its amazing to me.
the blends seems pretty good.
do i love it? no. do i like it? yeah.
 

Technique: [18/20]
how masterful are you at blending/cutting
blending is good, but i can't really tell i
f its cause the image was some what "easy" to blend
since the colors were all similar and ithe texture on top hides it.
either way, he is blended into the image quite well.
ithe thing he's leaning on however stands out a lot, 
and i would have prefered it if it was blurred out even though i know it could be tricky, 
you can try selecting it with the lasso tool and doing a gaussian blur, 
or make a new layer and make some spots with a brush tool,
to hide or extend it the dark part.
also the red glow, i can see a solid line where the layer ended. 
try to blur or erase harsh edges like that

Resources: [18/20]
does your images/stocks/brushes/textures enhance the poster
images are good. quality is good. texture used is good.
stock is good. not much more i can say about it.
right now the poster seems a bit flat. its nice but i think 
its missing that luster. i think another stock might have been good in this situation.
especially since you only have one chracter. there really is only one focal point in this piece.
if you exclude the text, so maybe something simple like a clock?
or experiment with color. 
i know the original image was black and white 
but you dont have to default to a black and white piece. 
you can try to see if something works out.

 

Composition: [13/20]

did you create an eye catching and balanced piece
how well does your piece "flow"
you mentioned that you dont know what composition is, so ill try to explain it.
(but p.s. i dont thi

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BunniesOnTheMoon
#1
Chapter 50: Sorry for the late comment bb! Thank you for the review! I wasn't too sure on this one, and I started doubting myself after I sent it in, but I guess I should be more confident because you thought it was interesting ^^
I do admit I oversharpenined this a bit more than I should XD The pictures used were fuzzy after I resized and I overcompensated by sharpening too much OTL
<3
SapphireQueen #2
Chapter 41: oh no :c
you are my favorite reviewer <3
well, always supporting :D
Stargawn #3
Chapter 41: Nooooo!! :"( that makes me really sad. I really liked the way you reviewed. I think you're the best reviewer I know here and you're one of my favorite designers too ^_^
Oh well...it's understandable. I wish you good luck with your other things=]
ChibiMusicStar
#4
Chapter 41: awww too bad >.<
Your reviews are awesome and you are one of my fav designer + reviewer. Good luck in your studies and graphic skills :D
vanivici #5
Chapter 41: Awww too bad!
I really like your way reviewing a poster. C:
Andd you're one of my fav designer , and i think you are the best reviewer out there! XDD hahaha
Goodluck for your another things then! <3
teaquiIa #6
would you like to be an affies? c:
a graphic review shop, `( gleaming sunset; www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/243077
CoolerThanYou #7
Poster Link : http://i4.minus.com/ixFyisXJUkTnT.jpg
theme/mood : angst, mistery
story link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/406486/his-dark-side-originalcharacter-exo-kai
any difficulties : I have problems on choosing fonts. I hope you can help me on that :D
Program used : photoshop cs5
Any other comment : Thank you :D
ChibiMusicStar
#8
poster link:http://i.imgur.com/gvvu9cX.png
theme/mood of story:romcance and sad
story link: n/a
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties:
Hmm i overuse blending at Jessica and the stock was kinda blurred right? So basically i want to try something new and fresh. Ohh i have problem with the placement of stocks and fonts :D
program used: Gimp :D
any other comments: Vanessa is the coolest XD
Soshiss
#9
poster link:
theme/mood of story:
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/387184/loveplayer-you-exo-exom-luhan
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties: i hope to archieve is to blend some colors together with the used of textures (: Diffulties? Hard to find a suitable texture.
program used: Gimp...
any other comments: nope