First Impressions: [8/10]
at first glance what i thought (sometimes unedited thoughts
and how my mind works when i first look)
it looks cute. sort of overly cute?
maybe cause of all the pink, the butterfly, the birds, the flowers, the crown, the clock
not saying that cute is bad, just that maybe put it in moderation?
it all stands out a lot and im not sure if its all necessary.
for instance are butterflies, birds and clocks super important elements in the story?
stocks should have more use than decoration / space fillers.
i enjoy this poster and the combination looks nice,
the cute theme is nice, and i would just take out the butterfly and the clock
 

Technique: [19/20]
how masterful are you at blending/cutting
the cutting is very good. there's only some
small areas that could be improved.
i see a small blue outline for the guy's picture.
the flowers for example near the girl are a little pixilated.
try to smooth those out some more
also i noticed a drop shadow on the bottom pattern, 
i think it looks a bit awkward cause it stands out and
doesnt match with the other parts.

 

Resources: [15/20]
does your images/stocks/brushes/textures enhance the poster
like i mentioned before, the stocks i think should
relate to the theme/message of the poster and enhance its meaning.
so i feel like the clock and the butterfly are not needed.
i like the patterns in the back, and the combination with the photo strip.
it looks like a scrapbook and its nice.
the images are good and the quality is fine.
the part where i think could have helped you a lot is
textures and coloring. right now, for the most part, 
except maybe the photo strip, i cant see any color changes or effects.
it doesnt have to be very in your face or something,
but some subtle changes are nice to bring the whole piece together
and make it look cohesive.

 

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