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First Impressions: [5/10]
at first glance what i thought (sometimes unedited thoughts
and how my mind works when i first look)
"it didn't really leave me with a positive impression, when i first saw it.
its not bad, its's just not amazing. there was nothing jaw dropping."

 

Technique: [14/20]
how masterful are you at blending/cutting
The image on the left is cut well and the outline is nice and smooth.
The image on the right however has multiple issues. The cut is not smooth, 
and then surrounding it, the outline seems to be a of the image, 
which reflects the jagged edges. It seems like it was cut in paint 
with the box eraser. To fix this, i would conside smudging the edges 
out after cutting. Or cut with a different tool like the pen tool or path tool for gimp.

 

Resources: [7/20]
does your images/stocks/brushes/textures enhance the poster
the images used are ok. i think they were chosen to match the
"thinking of you in my mind, so i point to my head" theme.
The quality of the photos are fine, I would have editted them both to match
skintones using the curves function. 
The speech bubble could have been done better. 
Just doing a google image search for "speech bubble" brings a few 
results that could have been used. It bothers me how the circles towards their heads
are /outlined much more thicker than the bubble. 
It doesn't match well. I also don't like that floral pattern strip.
The background is quite random to me, espcially the pink blob behind 
the character on the right.
I'd look into getting more textures and resources. They could have added a lot.
Look for some basics like: paper textures.

Composition: [15/20]

did you create an eye catching and balanced piece
how well does your

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BunniesOnTheMoon
#1
Chapter 50: Sorry for the late comment bb! Thank you for the review! I wasn't too sure on this one, and I started doubting myself after I sent it in, but I guess I should be more confident because you thought it was interesting ^^
I do admit I oversharpenined this a bit more than I should XD The pictures used were fuzzy after I resized and I overcompensated by sharpening too much OTL
<3
SapphireQueen #2
Chapter 41: oh no :c
you are my favorite reviewer <3
well, always supporting :D
Stargawn #3
Chapter 41: Nooooo!! :"( that makes me really sad. I really liked the way you reviewed. I think you're the best reviewer I know here and you're one of my favorite designers too ^_^
Oh well...it's understandable. I wish you good luck with your other things=]
ChibiMusicStar
#4
Chapter 41: awww too bad >.<
Your reviews are awesome and you are one of my fav designer + reviewer. Good luck in your studies and graphic skills :D
vanivici #5
Chapter 41: Awww too bad!
I really like your way reviewing a poster. C:
Andd you're one of my fav designer , and i think you are the best reviewer out there! XDD hahaha
Goodluck for your another things then! <3
teaquiIa #6
would you like to be an affies? c:
a graphic review shop, `( gleaming sunset; www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/243077
CoolerThanYou #7
Poster Link : http://i4.minus.com/ixFyisXJUkTnT.jpg
theme/mood : angst, mistery
story link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/406486/his-dark-side-originalcharacter-exo-kai
any difficulties : I have problems on choosing fonts. I hope you can help me on that :D
Program used : photoshop cs5
Any other comment : Thank you :D
ChibiMusicStar
#8
poster link:http://i.imgur.com/gvvu9cX.png
theme/mood of story:romcance and sad
story link: n/a
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties:
Hmm i overuse blending at Jessica and the stock was kinda blurred right? So basically i want to try something new and fresh. Ohh i have problem with the placement of stocks and fonts :D
program used: Gimp :D
any other comments: Vanessa is the coolest XD
Soshiss
#9
poster link:
theme/mood of story:
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/387184/loveplayer-you-exo-exom-luhan
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties: i hope to archieve is to blend some colors together with the used of textures (: Diffulties? Hard to find a suitable texture.
program used: Gimp...
any other comments: nope