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sorry if this review is sort of lazy >_< i keep pressing the back button by accident 
or something happens. this is the 4th time rewriting the review :(
main points are all listed, i just didnt write complete sentences.
if you dont understand some parts just ask me to explain

First Impressions: [7.5/10]
at first glance what i thought (sometimes unedited thoughts
and how my mind works when i first look)
blending is much improved.
it needs contrast.
to adjust contrast:
brightness&contrast / curves / levels / layer modes / combination of them

 

Technique: [17.5/20]
how masterful are you at blending/cutting
blending is much better in this poster. no harsh edges.
no conjoined people.
the flower could be blended better. good on bottom, 
but flower disappears on top.

left guys head reminds me of:

also spot on the right guy could be blurred out or blendded better
 

Resources: [17/20]
does your images/stocks/brushes/textures enhance the poster
images used are good. textures are good. i like the text
i like the graininess; matches mood.
lines on right good. would have liked them 
to be on left too so it can balance the piece.
colors work for this poster, but i would like to see how 
you use other textures and colors.
 

Composition: [18/20]

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sorry ive sort of neglected this ahaha but it takes me at least a solid hour to do one! and i dont like starting and stopping so i need to find some down time

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BunniesOnTheMoon
#1
Chapter 50: Sorry for the late comment bb! Thank you for the review! I wasn't too sure on this one, and I started doubting myself after I sent it in, but I guess I should be more confident because you thought it was interesting ^^
I do admit I oversharpenined this a bit more than I should XD The pictures used were fuzzy after I resized and I overcompensated by sharpening too much OTL
<3
SapphireQueen #2
Chapter 41: oh no :c
you are my favorite reviewer <3
well, always supporting :D
Stargawn #3
Chapter 41: Nooooo!! :"( that makes me really sad. I really liked the way you reviewed. I think you're the best reviewer I know here and you're one of my favorite designers too ^_^
Oh well...it's understandable. I wish you good luck with your other things=]
ChibiMusicStar
#4
Chapter 41: awww too bad >.<
Your reviews are awesome and you are one of my fav designer + reviewer. Good luck in your studies and graphic skills :D
vanivici #5
Chapter 41: Awww too bad!
I really like your way reviewing a poster. C:
Andd you're one of my fav designer , and i think you are the best reviewer out there! XDD hahaha
Goodluck for your another things then! <3
teaquiIa #6
would you like to be an affies? c:
a graphic review shop, `( gleaming sunset; www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/243077
CoolerThanYou #7
Poster Link : http://i4.minus.com/ixFyisXJUkTnT.jpg
theme/mood : angst, mistery
story link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/406486/his-dark-side-originalcharacter-exo-kai
any difficulties : I have problems on choosing fonts. I hope you can help me on that :D
Program used : photoshop cs5
Any other comment : Thank you :D
ChibiMusicStar
#8
poster link:http://i.imgur.com/gvvu9cX.png
theme/mood of story:romcance and sad
story link: n/a
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties:
Hmm i overuse blending at Jessica and the stock was kinda blurred right? So basically i want to try something new and fresh. Ohh i have problem with the placement of stocks and fonts :D
program used: Gimp :D
any other comments: Vanessa is the coolest XD
Soshiss
#9
poster link:
theme/mood of story:
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/387184/loveplayer-you-exo-exom-luhan
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties: i hope to archieve is to blend some colors together with the used of textures (: Diffulties? Hard to find a suitable texture.
program used: Gimp...
any other comments: nope