MRSLEE

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First Impressions: [10/10]
at first glance what i thought (sometimes unedited thoughts
and how my mind works when i first look)
AGH. this poster is like perfect. what do i even have to say?
Other reviews i have to look at how to give points, 
here i have to think of what to subtract!
i have to stare and get up close an personal to it,
to see if theres any areas to improve.
i dont know how you improve on perfect though.

 

Technique: [19.5/20]
how masterful are you at blending/cutting
you know your blending is like perfect right?
i have to really really be looking for something to comment to find these things.
the top of the girl's head is a bit too blurred.
maybe lasso, feather and then add some contrast there.
but she is blended pretty damn well in there especially since the background is from the guy's picture.
at first i thought you went and got some stock like
in a train cabin. thats what it felt like to me, but the i saw the dudes original picture
and it was a locker room lol.
oh well. still makes me think of the animated Anastasia movie.
the only other thing i can comment on is that blob on the left.
is it a cloud? or smoke? or from texture? iono but it stands out just a hair too much.
makes me think of an hourglass. not sure if its good of bad.
i would have probably moved the stock up to raise the horizon line 
to minimize hourglass

yes she is rocking a halo.
 

Resources: [19/20]
does your images/stocks/brushes/textures enhance the poster
images are good goes well with theme.  i dont like how the girl 
is looking down but whatever still matches. textures use good. 
nothing unneeded there. i like the subtlety it brings. the light scratches for instance.
i like that subtle glow behind the quote, adds more dimension.
you got the train part down but i wish there was something connecting it to the heaven part.
i like how the stock adds that one point perspective
and brings even more attention into the title. 
maybe make the stock show up a bit more?
to make it obvious what kind of scene or image it is.
right now because its qu

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BunniesOnTheMoon
#1
Chapter 50: Sorry for the late comment bb! Thank you for the review! I wasn't too sure on this one, and I started doubting myself after I sent it in, but I guess I should be more confident because you thought it was interesting ^^
I do admit I oversharpenined this a bit more than I should XD The pictures used were fuzzy after I resized and I overcompensated by sharpening too much OTL
<3
SapphireQueen #2
Chapter 41: oh no :c
you are my favorite reviewer <3
well, always supporting :D
Stargawn #3
Chapter 41: Nooooo!! :"( that makes me really sad. I really liked the way you reviewed. I think you're the best reviewer I know here and you're one of my favorite designers too ^_^
Oh well...it's understandable. I wish you good luck with your other things=]
ChibiMusicStar
#4
Chapter 41: awww too bad >.<
Your reviews are awesome and you are one of my fav designer + reviewer. Good luck in your studies and graphic skills :D
vanivici #5
Chapter 41: Awww too bad!
I really like your way reviewing a poster. C:
Andd you're one of my fav designer , and i think you are the best reviewer out there! XDD hahaha
Goodluck for your another things then! <3
teaquiIa #6
would you like to be an affies? c:
a graphic review shop, `( gleaming sunset; www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/243077
CoolerThanYou #7
Poster Link : http://i4.minus.com/ixFyisXJUkTnT.jpg
theme/mood : angst, mistery
story link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/406486/his-dark-side-originalcharacter-exo-kai
any difficulties : I have problems on choosing fonts. I hope you can help me on that :D
Program used : photoshop cs5
Any other comment : Thank you :D
ChibiMusicStar
#8
poster link:http://i.imgur.com/gvvu9cX.png
theme/mood of story:romcance and sad
story link: n/a
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties:
Hmm i overuse blending at Jessica and the stock was kinda blurred right? So basically i want to try something new and fresh. Ohh i have problem with the placement of stocks and fonts :D
program used: Gimp :D
any other comments: Vanessa is the coolest XD
Soshiss
#9
poster link:
theme/mood of story:
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/387184/loveplayer-you-exo-exom-luhan
what you hoped to achieve / any difficulties: i hope to archieve is to blend some colors together with the used of textures (: Diffulties? Hard to find a suitable texture.
program used: Gimp...
any other comments: nope