The Wonderful Adventure of Kai (and his minions) by -Ritsu

I WANT TO READ!! SEND ME UR STORY!! I'LL GIVE FEEDBACK-2!!

 

So I was reading, ,

After reading your description, I was like- 

Then when I read the first chapter, , Is it supposed to make sense?

Then I realized it's a crack/rant fic, 

 

So I sat back and just read it 

 

Because I don't think there is anything to really edit... you wrote what you wanted to -End of Discussion :D

 

So here it is~

THE WONDERFUL ADVENTURE OF KAI (AND HIS MINIONS) 

what a bannar!!!

-RITSU

 

REVIEWED BY

LIMALEMON

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LimaLemon
how long as it been ?!! i need 4 more subbies to make it a 100

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Hunteris5000
#1
I don't know if you guys are still taking requests but...
Yeah, I'd apprecite you review on this story:
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/410315/revenge-angst-drama-romance-exo-exom-kris
Thank you, sorry for bothering you if you're not taking any more. ^^
illuminousink #2
uhh... Hi there. I'm not sure how to request for a review. and I'm not sure when you'll be taking in new requests but I would really like to ask for a review. uhm. Thank you.
dbsk_cassie
#3
Chapter 26: Thanks for your honest and helpful review! I agree with what you said about my first chapter, I wrote it a while ago and just recently read it, I want to change it but then the ppl who's already read it would be confuse. I am also glad you liked my story! And thank you again!
Violet12123
#4
Chapter 25: Thank you for reviewing, but I think you are confused. I wrote my story in PRESENT tense not past tense, so "I eat" is correct. I tried to write this in a way that made sense to people who didn't speak perfect english, so my grammar wasn't perfect, but I am a fluent English speaker, so I hope it's decent. I did have a hard time with the plot, because everything had already been done that I could do! My photoshopping skills when I first wrote this were really poor, but now they've improved a lot, I just haven't had time to redo it. Now if I could I would have submitted a better story, but at the time I only had this one! But I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you.
cellolvr9819
#5
I was wondering if you could review my story next time you get the chance? :) http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/422682/flower-boy-bakery-romance-exo-exok-sehun-baekhyun
thank youuu~
kpopperforever #6
Apparently you're hiring? If you are, I would like to apply, thanks!
DespisedSecret
#7
Chapter 22: Thanks for reading my story! So sorry about getting to this so late (I was out of town) and don't worry, I take all criticism as constructive ^.^