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I AM NOT A CRITIC, I AM JUST A NORMAL READER WHO WILL HELP YOU WITH HOW A READER LIKES YOUR STORY

Done by kpopperforever

Title:
The title was slightly common, because a lot of people like to do stuff like "Dream High 3", "Romantic and Idol Season 3", and other shows or dramas that have more than one season and involve either idols or a school setting. This is a pro and a con, because after reading too many of these titles, I just think, "oh, another story based on this show." It may encourage Dream High lovers to read it, though.

Description and Foreword: 
It wouldn't make me want to read the story, honestly. It was boring and un descriptive. Also, I'm not fond of character charts, it looks unprofessional and not good. Shouldn't the reader discover the characters along the way, while reading the story, instead of knowing everything about the characters from the beginning?

Poster and Appearance:

The poster looked slightly squashed, and it wasn't very appealing. The format and appearance of the story was still okay, there weren't too many distracting pictures or brightly colored, hard to read fonts. Job well done here!

Story:
Your grammar was quite poor, there were many mistakes to do with tenses. For example, in the first chapter, there was a sentence where you stated that "I eat my entire breakfast in one bite", where it should, in fact, be ate. There were also a few errors that didn't affect my understanding of the story. If you would like to know more, please PM me! 

Plot and Flow:
The flow was just nice, I liked it. However, the plot was slightly cliche, I've seen many stories to do with this kind of thing. >_< Nice story in general, though.

Overall:
Nice story, I enjoyed reading it. The only problem for me was the description and foreword, the rest were minor errors.

Thanks! ^_^

So here it is~

Dream High 3

by

Violet12123