EDITING!

The Shadow Games

HELLO! BONJOUR! HOLA! ANNYEONG! NIHAO! KONICHIWA!  :D

My dear readers, thank you for taking time to read my "baby"! Its been over a year that I finished this story, and in that time I've continued to receive very constructive comments from you all~ If you go to CHAPTER 56, you will learn about my dream of publishing this story. But for that I need to edit it A LOT, not only the plot(just a liiiittle bit!) but the grammar, and the layout as well. So,what I want is to hear from you what you would like to be changed or if something needs modification. Please give me your most sincere evaluations so I can soon publish something that will be pleasant to the majority of the public. Don't be shy or afraid! I dont bite :D hahah Also, as you might have seen on CHAPTER 56, the requirement for me to publish is 500 upvotes, so please do help out with that as well if you can~! ^.^

Example of recomendations i have received till now include:

- Put dialogue in paragraph form, not in script form

- Remove pictures and put more descriptions instead (I started doing that but have not been able to finish some chapters, so You will stillfind a few pics here and there).

- Dont repeat the same thing over and over again through chapters.... (yes I am sorry about that!)

This story has already been featured by the readers (YAY! I WAS SO HAPPY THAT DAY!!), so that gives me an idea on how much the public likes it. And of cours your lovely comments always make me cry haha~ So please, from the bottom of my heart, comment your opinion and give the advice you want~ ^^

Thank you once again for your time!!! Dont be afraid to contact me in any case!! take care my loves!!!

Sincerely,

From the one who is alway in debt with her readers

Siona Lenne Kirisage <3

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12/22/13-The Shadow Games Completed!

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ladybugjaz
#1
Chapter 55: i cried a river :/ if I have puffy eyes in the morning I'm blaming you Authornim
I really hate you you know :'(
, i can't control the faucet :'''''(
thanks for the story but I still hate you.
I ddnt even cry that over the Titanic movie but this caught me off guard since there's Kai and Luhan involved.
now I have to start another story to fix back my mood :/ otherwise I will suffer cuz I won't be able to take my mind of this story :(
you did a great job Authornim but seriously I would have loved a happy ending -this is not one for me-
ladybugjaz
#2
Chapter 43: whenever something happens MJ is always like "kai, do something!" -.-
ladybugjaz
#3
Chapter 39: i thought Suho is supposed to be the master .. hmmm
Kisara93 #4
Chapter 12: Omg dear.. Your story is really wonderful!!! I love MJ characterization so much, she's like the best oc I've ever read.. I cannor even wait until the ending to comment. You've done a good job.. I love her fierce protective attitude and she's not afraid to kill, thats got me hook line and sinker.. At this point I just hope baby lulu is okay..haha
Extraordinary13
#5
Chapter 55: I've read the end so many times and I cry every time T_T
This will always be my favourite fanfic <3
FroeFroe #6
Chapter 30: I'm almost scared to continue reading.....
I realy don't want to reach the end
Author-nim you rock!!!
hazie_inspirit
#7
Chapter 56: I dont know what to say anymore...
Speechless.....
Thank you for the amazing beautiful story.
luhanry #8
I love this story so much! This is the second time I've read it and both times I cried when Kai died. This fanfic is the very first fic that I found awesome, really awesome and touching.

I hope that one day you get to make a book out of this , I really do. I have voted too. Hoping rest of the needed votes will come too!

Thank you so much for an amazingly - lovely-hearttugging-engrosing-terrific-story Siona, thank you!
mimsi91 #9
Chapter 56: It was beautiful :) :) :)
PlKACHU
#10
OMFG GREAT FANFIC I LOVED IT