EDITING!
The Shadow GamesHELLO! BONJOUR! HOLA! ANNYEONG! NIHAO! KONICHIWA! :D
My dear readers, thank you for taking time to read my "baby"! Its been over a year that I finished this story, and in that time I've continued to receive very constructive comments from you all~ If you go to CHAPTER 56, you will learn about my dream of publishing this story. But for that I need to edit it A LOT, not only the plot(just a liiiittle bit!) but the grammar, and the layout as well. So,what I want is to hear from you what you would like to be changed or if something needs modification. Please give me your most sincere evaluations so I can soon publish something that will be pleasant to the majority of the public. Don't be shy or afraid! I dont bite :D hahah Also, as you might have seen on CHAPTER 56, the requirement for me to publish is 500 upvotes, so please do help out with that as well if you can~! ^.^
Example of recomendations i have received till now include:
- Put dialogue in paragraph form, not in script form
- Remove pictures and put more descriptions instead (I started doing that but have not been able to finish some chapters, so You will stillfind a few pics here and there).
- Dont repeat the same thing over and over again through chapters.... (yes I am sorry about that!)
This story has already been featured by the readers (YAY! I WAS SO HAPPY THAT DAY!!), so that gives me an idea on how much the public likes it. And of cours your lovely comments always make me cry haha~ So please, from the bottom of my heart, comment your opinion and give the advice you want~ ^^
Thank you once again for your time!!! Dont be afraid to contact me in any case!! take care my loves!!!
Sincerely,
From the one who is alway in debt with her readers
Siona Lenne Kirisage <3
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