Hi people. This is my first story. So please understand if my story is boring. Please comment so i can improve on my writing. I don't mind if the comment is to criticise my writing as long as it is not written in a disrespectful way.

Plot:
You are a 18 year old Singaporean ballad singer in Korea. You are just an average singer. You have more anti-fans than fans as you are friends with quite a lot of male singers. Only after you are involved in Taiwan production where you starred in a drama with Taiwanese celebrities, your fame increased a little. Those anti-fans still hate you like hell. The story will start with you after auditioning for another drama.

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I will try to keep the story realistic. I'm a bit stuck when I'm writing the plot. Basically, it's a story about 'your' life as a singer in a foreign country. The obstacles, the criticism that you have to handle alone. Hope this story would be a success :)

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Time- 8:35PM
Date- 080710