Loyal to a Fault

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Yixing stood on the roof, watching his target with his gun ready to shoot at any moment. He knew that he could react at a second's notice, taking them down as soon as he saw the enemy. His only problem was that his partner, Jongdae, was still down there, also waiting. That made him nervous, especially since they had last parted on bad terms. He just hoped that Jongdae would forgive him and come back to his senses soon, but he would work on that later. Right now, he had to focus on his mission.

 

Settling down against his scope again, he watched as the man stepped into his view. The young Chinese man had his gun set to stun him, and Jongdae was meant to be a distraction, and nothing more. He was great at that. He followed the target through his scope, but right before he shot, he saw Jongdae sneaking up behind the man. Yixing felt nervous and almost panicked as his partner closed in on him. His heart was hammering in his chest as he saw the target turn swiftly, shooting Jongdae down. Yixing was shocked, but took that chance to react quickly, shooting the enemy in the chest...twice. The man fell to the ground, unconscious. 

 

His hands shaking, Yixing rushed down to Jongdae, ripping his jacket off, pressing it against the wound on his friend's side. When Jongdae tried to speak, he shook his head. "Don't waste your strength." He smiled at his friend, hiding his own worry. He didn't want to lose him NOW, and would do anything to get him back to the base safely. Hitting the button on on his watch, he called for backup. As soon as Kyungsoo and Sehun appeared, he motioned toward the enemy. Kyungsoo approached the man cauciously, handcuffing him before instructing Sehun to help with Jongdae. Yixing and Sehun lifted the injured agent carefully, and Sehun touched the button on his watch, transporting them back to the base.

 

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Pacing back and forth in the infermary, Yixing felt as if he would go crazy. Jongdae was still in surgery, and he hadn't seen him since he had been injured. He needed to make things right with him, and couldn't bear the thought of losing the man he loved. Just the thought of it was driving him crazy and making his heart hurt.

 

After almost an hour, the door opened, and the doctor walked out. Yixing took a deep breath as he hurried over to him, still shaking. "How is he, doctor?"

 

The young man smiled at him,

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babikhun
#1
Chapter 45: Poor boys T____T that was a very sad :(but I loved reading it, please write more emotional stories like this
babikhun
#2
Oh it's been a while since the last chapter, I'm excited to read the new one! But would you please write more 2pm
babikhun
#3
I like malty groups fics so I think I will enjoy this
cassrr #4
looks cool! :D
annabloem
#5
Chapter 20: I forgot how much I enjoyed your stories! I really enjoyed this chapter a lot! I'm going to try and catch up with all the other chapters I haven't read yet when I find the time, it's a great stress reliever.
I really liked the whole secret agent(?) thing in this chapter, and the ending ... I wish I got more xD I want to know what happened to them after that!
Taeyeon_ssJH
#6
Daebak!!!!
-Tigress-
#7
Chapter 25: Oops, this is a double post =)
lovekiller_tsuna
#8
Chapter 13: I missed your update!
I'm okay with supernatural...but it's seem taekwoon okay with the turned process...
Amalya
#9
Chapter 13: Well this was certainly different. I always do enjoy seeing Hakyeon in a more commanding role at times. haha And I thought the last paragraph was a very lovely one of reflection for him. It very much reveals how people in general can be and how finding someone worth being with often changes things for them.

I was a little annoyed with Hakyeon for basically stealing Taekwoon like that, but it did work out in the end. And they eventually became happy, though I'd imagine the latter was pretty upset with Hakyeon initially. For the first few days/weeks at least. lol What was the comment of Hakyeon saying that Taekwoon looked familiar? Was that an excuse to get close to him or did he really think he was familiar to someone? lol

Intriguing story overall too. I'm becoming more a fan of supernatural things (so long as they're not Twilight related heh) and this was a pleasant one to check out. *nods* Good job.
Amalya
#10
Chapter 12: Another very interesting story line and concept. I was confused about the paradise aspect when you mentioned the Aletrons were their strongest enemies, but if they knew they had enemies, why wouldn't they have some sort of defense or whatnot? Other than that, I do enjoy a good sci-fi read. I thought it was interesting that you built in some of the restrictions you did (no same pairs!) but I suppose that is part of what made their relationship so special in the end.

I'm having a hard time envisioning how Taehyun's plan was able to end everything but I am glad it worked. Whatever he did. Their relationship was also quite believable and incredibly cute. Growing up as friends to becoming something more over time. haha How old were they when they were tested? Just curious. But this was another interesting take on your prompt. I have to look a little harder to see the connections but they're there. ;)

Good job and keep up the good work.