Editing this~

Guardians of My Soul and Life *Editing*

This is the very first story I've ever wrote here and I know that I made a lot of mistakes and I want to fix it. I don't know how I should fix it so I want your opinion~

 

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First chapter edited~

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Lolypop123 #1
Chapter 54: Yay for happy ending ^3^♥
Minnhae
#2
Chapter 4: That bag is so cuteee but if I'm the one who using it probably at the day one the bag will no longer be useful. Considering on how many text book I have to bring xD
YuiJ007
#3
Chapter 54: lol I was like what? why is B.A.P attacking them and then you do it and i was like asdfghjkl! haha, i love it. great job author! (≧▽≦)/~┴┴
Exoticfan
#4
Chapter 54: OMagaD O-O <3 /fangirlmomentthurr/
sazuka #5
Chapter 54: You surely have to made a sequel or I will bite you
WushuPandaUhnnie
#6
Chapter 51: is it just me? or is the ending's a bit confusing? btw. I like it ;)
qtkyungsoo #7
Chapter 54: Its great!! First u make me confuse about the special bap part....
I thought they have a battle again...
then u made the story happy ending....
Sooooo sweeeetttt!!! I love it!!! =))))
sazuka #8
Chapter 54: #author nim why in this story, I have to become
TAO(panda) oppa best friend & dongsaeng? I don't want to!

#because I wanted to be his, become his girl friend and then become his wife... and he will be mine (hehehehehe ^_^)

#anyways this was a great story
#awesome
#happy
#sad
#interesting etc




#I can say this story have every thing...




author nim




DAEBAK




DAEBAK




DAEBAK




SUPER




D.....A.....E.....B.....A.....K




LOVE U




AUTHOR NIM




HWAITING...
hoshi_starkwon
#9
Chapter 54: i would never be suho's sister!









because i want to be his only wife xXDDD