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The Adventures of Deer Boy
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The Adventures of Deer Boy by sjohnson2
Reviewed by cherrylisa
Title: (3/5)
The title is nice and simple and it has shared its contribution to the plot very well. It has peaked my curiosity what the adventure is.
Description/Foreword: (8/10)
The description has somehow gave away some of the clue. But it was well said and it gave a vibe of curiosity.
Plot: (22/25)
The plot was hilarious and funny. It sends me cackling up and made me throw myself out of the chair because of too much laughter. The plot is great and has twist that I’m not expecting it at all.
Grammar: (17/20)
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