The Travel Home

The Adventures of Deer Boy
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The Travel Home

          When you come home you’re supposed to be greeted by a loving family and great food, but for the DEER BOY he gets the exact opposite. When left feeling alone it takes his friends to truly know where Luhan’s REAL HOME IS.

            Luhan leads the pack of nine to his house. The DEER BOY knowing that the group can stay there for a while. As all nine pass by streets and stop lights they all get stares from people. Not knowing who or what the nines boys are they just stare in awe. Luhan finds himself getting a little self-conscious as the people do not look away. It gets to the point where the DEER BOY starts to sweat, eww.  A hand places rests on Luhan’s shoulder as he looks behind him. Lay smiles at him, as Luhan finds himself smiling back.

            The boys walk a few paces earning more stares, but Tao and Xiumin gives everyone an icy glare as they walk by. Kai also looks calm, even though it’s been a long time since he’s been to a town. The Baekhyun hides behind Kyungsoo as Kyungsoo himself walks proudly every now and then interlacing his fingers with Kai. Chanyeol on the other hand flashes a creepy smile to anyone as he looks to a small crowd of people. Lay and Suho are keeping pace at the back as Suho clings to his partners back. Suho’s fish tail finally returned, only asking a few times a splash some water on him to keep him wet.

            The group finally enters an empty street, and Luhan grows more nervous, it’s been a long time since he’s seen his mother. As the DEER BOY walks he wonders if his mother had thought about him since throwing him out. Shivers runs through his body as he sees his house poking out at the end of the street. He swallows hard as he gets closer and closer to the house. He stops eyes locked on the house that he used to call his. Everyone else looks to Luhan waiting for his next move.

            Tears well up in the Luhan’s Bambi eyes, “guys here it is…”

            The Unicorn looks along the house searching for any sign of life, “This is your house?”

            “Yup,” he sniffs.

            Kyungsoo walks forwards looking at Luhan’s face, “are you okay, Luhan?”

            “Never better…”

            “Well what are we waiting for,” Xiumin speaks up.

            “Well here we… go,” Luhan walks up the steps, slowly going. Everyone stands on the sidewalk looking to Luhan. The DEER BOY breathes hard. His fingers lock onto the door knob. He remembers that his mother never locked the door because she said that anytime Luhan needed safety it was here. The knob twists and Luhan pushes the door open, he stands still.

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cheappen123
#1
Chapter 27: this story cracked me up WAY too much :D
Keep writing!
(I love the randomness :P)
Potterhead4Life
#2
Chapter 25: This is amazing! ; u ; Ugh love this so much. <3 It was super fun to read. Thank you~

-goes to the sequel-
YeojaUiMongsang
#3
Chapter 27: OMG that was an amazing story!
I loved it so much :D
I really like adventure and comedy stories and this one was really great to read
Nice work author-nim
Now I shall go and read the sequal c:
honeybear169
#4
Chapter 8: deer boy,*SIGHS* NICE TOPIC!
honeybear169
#5
YAH!AWESOME
honeybear169
#6
Chapter 8: love this story!
Potato
#7
Chapter 25: YeSyesyesYEs
I'll call you
Oh wow I'm done again!!!
It's hilarious (I find) that none of them know about BoA.
Oh did you update the sequel rn?
Going
Going
Gone
Potato
#8
Chapter 24: GO BOA!
GO BOA!!!
Wow… that escalated quickly. XD
Boa's so cool… /drools/
Potato
#9
Chapter 23: Wow
Xiumin+Bun helmet=best OTP yet!
Also the stories of the three dudes (Sehun, Chen and Kriseu) are pretty sad and even more so because Luhan doesn't know he did this.
Also the bacon scene and scratch that ALL the fighting scenes are so… UGHH a
Even if this is my second time reading… SOOOO GOOD
Okay off to the last two ^^
Potato
#10
Chapter 14: "Eww I'm sweating"