♔ Pabo Review ♔

[JongKey] Love is a sickness by aniangel07 (Reviewer SuperJunior143)

♔ Title 5/5
‘Love is Sickness’ is like a very interesting title! So I knew it was going to be about love. I’ve never heard of a story called ‘Love is Sickness’ before too!
♔Description & Foreword 9/10
Even though you said you at descriptions, it would be better if you still type down about 5 sentences about the whole story. But that’s fine because the main thing is about Jonghyun and Key are brothers and they have desires for each other... I got that! :3
♔Plot 20/20
So Jonghyun and Key are brothers and Jonghyun grows feelings for his own brother? Nice!
♔Characters 17/20
You could’ve put some more details about Key and Jonghyun like their personality!
♔Originality 13/15
It’s really wonderful! Really! But I kind of read some stories about brothers and brothers loving each other and fall in love even though they think its wrong... Like Youngmin and Kwangmin! But this is soo detail and I loved it!!!
♔Flow 15/15
It was amazing~
♔Grammar /Spelling/Vocabulary 2/5
I saw a few of grammar mistakes, a few spelling errors, and the vocabulary was great! So the grammar mistake examples are like,
“When I was 17 I thought I have to die.”
So the right way to say that is, “When I was 17, I thought I could’ve died right there in the bathroom” or something similar to that.
♔Overall Enjoyment 10/10
This was like one of the hottest and most cute story of JongKey ever!! :3 I loved loved loved it! It made me cry when their father and mother separated them... So much drama! But I love drama... especially when it makes me cry! :’)
♔Total: 91/100
♔Reviewer’s Note & Tips:
Umm... grammar! That’s all! But again... it was beautifully written... <3<3<3<3<3
Keep on writing!!!! (Or typing!!! XD)

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