♔ Pabo Review ♔

I'm back until I die By: Katakatica (Reviewer:Miss3lee )

♔ Title 5/5
The title goes really well with the story!

♔Description & Foreword 10/10
The description is very complete ... It helps a lot to understand the story!

♔Plot 15/20
The plot was really interesting but is a bit ridiculous that Key thinks that only dyeing his hair and being thinner they won’t be able to recognize him

♔Characters 20/20
Main Character. (Key)
I really love Key’s character because he can be mean and y on the outside but warm and sweet on inside…

♔Originality 8/15
It is a good story but the part “they have to hate me so they are not going to be hurt” is a kind of cliché. It reminds me “Haru Haru” of Big Bang video.

♔Flow 15/ 15
The flow was really good!

♔Grammar /Spelling/Vocabulary 5/5
Grammar: Good.
Spelling: Really Good.
Vocabulary: Well Done!

♔Overall Enjoyment 8/ 10
Very interesting story!! But sometimes you want to get in the story and kick Key.

♔Total: 86/100
Well Done!!!! Keep writing stories like this! I am in love with your grammar! I understand everything!
I hope I didn’t offend you. If you don't think this review was fair, pm me. :D

♔Reviewer’s Note & Tips:
The only problem is the presentation the poster was way too fluffy for the sad story… So you could think that…

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