♔ Pabo Review ♔

Princess Charming Meets L

Reviewed by KatyMikayla

• ♔ Title 5/5
  • I like your title. It’s pretty creative :)
• ♔Description & Foreword 8/10
  • I liked it a lot xD Creative and fun :) the only part I didn’t really like was how it long it took for you and L to explain that this was your 2^nd fic xD
• ♔Plot 18/20
  • I really liked it :) it was funny and amusing. The only thing I didn’t like about it was how stupid L was xD seriously, at his age, he should know some things xD
• ♔Characters 18/20
  • Freaking. Love. Them xD
  • The one thing I do have to point out is that police officers tend to keep their cool. They really don’t act like Eunmi at all…
• ♔Originality 14.5/15
  • Even though you used a lot outside sources, it was pieced together very well. I just knocked off half a point because you didn’t think up of all those pranks xD
• ♔Flow 15/ 15
  • Flowed very well; events were all tied together and there were no random things happening :) good job
• ♔Grammar /Spelling/Vocabulary 3/5
  • “All the woman women” (use plural form here)
  • You switch a lot between past and present tenses. I suggest you keep it all in one tense, or it’ll get confusing
  • Douting= doubting
  • Flinced? I think you mean flinched
• ♔Overall Enjoyment 9/ 10
  • I liked it a lot
• ♔Total: 90.5/100
  • Well done <3
• ♔Reviewer’s Note & Tips:
  • It looks great! Keep up the good work <3

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