♔ Pabo Review ♔

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Reviewed By Rickieflower

♔ Title 4/5Your title was really good, but my first impression was that it was a supernatural fanfic.4/5

♔Description & Foreword 9/10Beautiful foreword. However the second part of the description confused me a bit.It wasn't too confusing so 9/10

♔Plot 17/20 Not the most original plot, but you don't see a lot of those. 17/20

♔Characters 19.5/20YAY SHINEE! The only complaint I have is with Onew. You haven't made him a chicken lover yet, but that doesn't matter so much i just took off half a point. 19.5/20

♔Originality 13/15Like I said before, the plot isn't the most original, but you made it a bit unique. The character ideas weren't the most original either, but at least you didn't stick with making Minho a pain in the . 13/15

♔Flow 14/15 So far the flow is really good. The only thing I would recommend is using something to indicate that the story is switching POV's 14/15

♔Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary 4/5Other than punctuation, it was perfect. 4/5

♔Overall Enjoyment 9/10

♔Total: 93.5/100

♔Reviewer’s Note & Tips: Because English isn't your first language, I'm being easy. But it's really good when it's not your first language.

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