♔ Pabo Review ♔

TEMPTED by menababy

reviewed by TheGirlOnFire

♔ Title 4.5/5
I dont see the connection but it makes the story seem interesting
♔Description & Foreword 10 /10
I like the description and foreword:) very nice
♔Plot 19.5/20
How they met was amazing, but just like any other stories, a bad and simple boy meet, fall in love, twists to their lives, it's just the same. But how and why they met, i like how it happened:)
♔Characters 19/20
I think there are too many characters...but the characters are...let me say 'well defined'...like they show their true characteristics in real life...
♔Originality 15/15
Unique plot of how they met and how everything else happened...i didnt expect key and taemin to be half brothers. and key and jonghyun's mental break down=AMAZING
♔Flow 15/15
There was nothing weird or not related happening in the middle of a scene

♔Grammar /Spelling/Vocabulary 2 /5
There was a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes...it gave me a little hard time reading because i needed to rearrange the sentence to understand better
♔Overall Enjoyment 10/ 10
I really really enjoy reading. i sleep till 3 in the morning just to read this!
♔Total: 95/100
♔Reviewer’s Note & Tips: keep on writing and writing but you may want to ask someone to check the grammar and spelling. 'threw'? I think you mean 'through'.

__Owner's Note; Pab0Panda

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BTW, see Nina? I tolds you that there was nothing wrong save the grammar and spelling... which I'm slowly fixing for you xD hahaha. I'll see if I can get chp 6 finally done (after what, like 2 months? xD sorry) for you this weekend