♔ Pabo Review ♔

To Be, Or Not To Be By xxSHINee_Jongkeyxx

Reviewed by TheGirlOnFire

♔ Title /4
I dont totally see how the title is related to the story but i find the title catchy

♔Description & Foreword /9
The character introductions were done at the description and a little about the story. Although i think the character introduction should be done in the 1st chapter and so on, it wasnt bad.

♔Plot /20
I really like the plot. How Key works as...well i dont know what his work is called but yeah. How the Sekyung and Jonghyun couple are involved instead of another pairing.

♔Characters /20
Key really sounds like a diva, which is a good point. Taemin is i think a little too childish but i think it's fair because of his bad asthma (in the story). Jjong's character is fine really. He's caring and thnis first. I dont have much to say about Minho and Onew...

♔Originality /15
I gave it 15 because from all the fanfictions i have read, it's my first time to see a pllot like this. It's pretty unique.

♔Flow / 14
I think how Key and Jonghyun became friends were too fast. Key just suddenly got in a stranger (which is Jonghyun)'s car. And Sekyung being irritated happened to fast. But the story flow is good too. Things move fast but they all have connections

♔Grammar /Spelling/Vocabulary /4
There were some grammar mistakes but not too noticable

♔Overall Enjoyment / 10
I enjoyed reading the recent chapter and hope for more to come.

♔Total: / 96

♔Reviewer’s Note & Tips: some chapters were short but I really enjoyed. A few grammar mistakes but it's not too noticable. I really like the plot of the story. I think lessen Taemin's childish side a bit. But overall the fanfiction was really good and entertaining. I enjoyed reading the current chapters:)

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