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Slave: Betrayal [Super Junior Version] by KatyMikayla (Review by SuperJunior143)
♔ Title 4/5
When I first saw the title, I thought it would be about . However, it sounded interesting!
♔Description & Foreword 9/10
I really liked the foreword! It made me curious about the story. The description was wonderful! It showed facts about all of your main characters. But it kind of needs a little more details of certain characters, you’ll see on my review about the characters.
♔Plot 20/20
It is great! It’s special and unique! It’s very cool! I liked the ‘Imagine’ part… I could see that picture in my head…
♔Characters 17/20
I think it needs a little more details about Donghae and I think you should put fewer characters because it tends to be very confusing to keep track of everyone in the story.
♔Originality 15/15
I’ve never read a story about this and it’s really good!!! :3
♔Flow 12/15
It’s fast and at some parts it’s fantastic! So you should take it slowly and not too fast.
♔Grammar /Spelling/Vocabulary 5/5
I don’t see any spelling errors or bad grammar. The vocabulary is amazing! You really sounded like a real author!
♔Overall Enjoyment 10/10
I really enjoyed the story! Sungmin and Jessica are the cutest couples! SungSica… or is it MinSica…? MinSica sounds correct… EunHae is cute too! It’s fantastic! Haha! I really loved the angst… X3
♔Total: 92/100
♔Reviewer’s Note & Tips:
Try to throw in some more details to make the flow a little bit slower. After all, it’s spectacular!!!
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