♔ Pabo Review ♔

 I'll be a big fat liar if I say I like you (Weird To Be With) - Reviewer Hebeee

♔ Title 4/5
You title didn’t impress me much, its not one of those topics that I would click in. But I hope your story can stick with your title more :0)


♔Description & Foreword 8/10
Okay, I don’t prefer characters introduction, but many fanfics does that so its not actually a problem. But your foreword seems too common, like its not quite original.

♔Plot 17/20
I like your plot it was amazing, but just how you write down the story bugs me a lot. It was like you were writing a script of some disney reality shows. I don’t know, but overall everything was quite nice. And I really like how you made MinJeong being creeped out by EXOs LOL.

♔Characters 17/20
Okay this is my personal problem, because my friend is called MinJeong and she is not a freaking nice and innocent girl whatsoever LOL. I think the characters are great, you stick with their real personality making your story more realistic :0D


♔Originality 13/15
There are many other fics like yours but you made it quite original:)


♔Flow 12/15
The flow was a bit too fast, its just that MinJeong met too much people in your first chapter, and it was like you were rushing through your plot.


♔Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary 4/5
There are some misspelling, but overall is good! Make sure to stick with one tense :P


♔Overall Enjoyment 8/10


♔Total: 83/100


♔Reviewer’s Note & Tips:
- Stick with one color, so that it won’t distract your readers!
Overall is good<3

All in all, you did a great job and if you have any problems with your review, feel free to pm me :0)

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