♔ Pabo Review ♔

[JongKey] The Beauty and the Vampire by Katakatica (Reviewer Miss3lee)

♔ Title 4/5
It goes good with the story… but it doesn’t catch attention.
♔Description & Foreword 10/10
More information would ruin the story. So good!
♔Plot: 15/20
It was good but a cliché at the same time….
♔Characters 20/20
I loved how you put the characters!
♔Originality 8/15
I don´t know put I have the sensation that I had read or seen this problem of a Completely Beautiful Person… Maybe in a book or on a television show…
♔Flow 10/ 15
It was good, but in some chapter the main story was interrupt with some random things…
♔Grammar /Spelling/Vocabulary: 3/5
Grammar: You shouldn’t repeat the names so much…
Spelling: Was really good!
Vocabulary: Well Done.
♔Overall Enjoyment: 10/ 10
Very interesting story I really like it … It was really easy to comprehend.
♔Total: 80/100
Well Done!!!!
♔Reviewer’s Note & Tips:
I really like the story! I love vampires.
Emm some tip… Like I said before you should think about the things in the grammar. Use adjectives or pronouns to name the person who is speaking, and sometimes Key was way too fragile and girly but that is my personal taste. That’s all… If you have some problem PM me :D!

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