Twenty Four

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"SARA'S POV"

 

As I was looking at the field, The door to the rooftop suddenly opened. Maybe that's Joy with my chocolate drink. 

"Did you get me two?" I stopped as I looked

"Sara,"

"What are you doing here? Don't you have class"

"I have something more important to do" he walked closer to me, I didn't stopped him

"I'm sorry" he whispered as he came and hug me so tight that I almost couldnt move

 

oh he smells good. I don't know but my heart suddenly started beating so fast that I think it might come outside my body.

"You're such a pain in the sometimes" I told him, smiling on his chest. He was resting his chin on the top of my head

"I know, please bear with it"

"Like I have a choice. What is this crappy thing on your hand anyway"

"Tulips, they are your favorite. For you"

"Oh such a cliche"

"I can't stop thinking at how I should make up to you. I even made up a list!"

"What list? Show me!"

"No, that is private"

"Is it the one in your pocket?"

 

I snatch it from the pocket of his uniform and opened it quickly and read his damn list

"What the! You think I am feisty?"

"Aren't you"

"Well hell I am!" we high fived and laughed

 

I looked at his list and laughed

"Show me your y body?" I looked at him in disgust

"What? That will come handy when the time comes. You can't r

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Zereothia
#1
This is one of the best stories I've read on Onew so far! I love it so much that I'm re-reading it!! <3
Thank you so much for this story Author-nim!! :)
kmfonacier #2
Chapter 60: You've done everything so great :-D thank you saeng for the great stories :-) see you again next time :-D
bluestormysky
#3
Chapter 60: love the ending, great story. good job author nim. u gonna sign off? well, u r one of my favo writers. gonna miss ur story..
kmfonacier #4
Chapter 58: 4 years of writing.
4 years of being a subscriber and a friend saeng, you know how much I love your stories and how much I always complement each and every story you make. You must've thought this many times. Writing an story is not an issue thing. You would'nt know what will people will react on your story but you have good readers and they really love your story saeng. I hope you can still write when you have time. And I wish we can see each other again. It's been also 4 years since the last time we've seen each other saeng.... THANK YOU FOR WONDERFUL STORIE SAENG. LOVE YOU SO MUCH
zettyez #5
Chapter 58: Why my heart hurt seeing ur word signing off?
U must've think alot too. Keep writing if u hv time, ive always adored ur writing. Tq for the wonderful stories, u remained one of my best aff author. ;)
shankerider
#6
Chapter 57: Awww... But I don't want her to break up with Key just because of Onew. I hope that if they break up in the end, it will be because she doesn't think they are compatible but they will still remain friends. She and Onew shouldn't get back together so quickly... I think she should still finish her studies first, since she does enjoy fashion though not Paris so much. Oh no... What will happen next?
kmfonacier #7
Chapter 56: Oh sorry, chapter 56..... Hihihi
kmfonacier #8
Chapter 56: The last time I check you only had chapter 52, now its chapter 55? Waaaahhh~~~ you update fast saeng :-D I'm gonna read now.... Mwuah~~~!!!
zettyez #9
Chapter 56: Comeon pls let things work for onew n sara!
Im impressed again, authornim!
Nayc2307
#10
Chapter 54: Thank you for all the updates on till now. It's really sad for both of them..although everything works out fine now. I think Onew will never be able to let go of Sara because of his crush for her is not a thing of when they hooked up, but from long time ago. So he will need more than half year to get over her. And Sara...oh man she is now with Key....WHY?!?!?? heheh but Key is really charming here. Looks like something's going to happen in the 2 weeks......very curious... i really felt it in the way you wrote their meeting... oh if i was Sara i will be totally stuttering. Thanks again! I will patiently wait for your next update. Silly onew!