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“SARA’S POV”

Just another hour of waiting until I opened the gates of pure celebration. My brother and I were known for the great parties that we throw every year, well he does most of the time. Being the Ace player of the soccer team is something else, you know. He is the cheerleaders-drool-over-me-even-the-entire-freaking-school does kind of popular. I heard from my classmates last time that girls from other schools keep sending him stuffs. Once he came home with a box in his hands

“What’s that?  A box with a rat on it?” I joked. Of course I know what it was. Every week he has those

“Some stuffs”

“Same old huh?”

“Yeap. It is getting kind of annoying when you are rushing to your class then you open your locker and a bunch of letters exploding in front of you and you have to clean it up then you end up being late again that you have to stand outside the class with your hands up high”

“You should date bro!”

“I don’t have time for that now”

“If you say so”

Choi Minho was the best freaking brother ever. After mom and dad got separated, he stood up as my own father and he was always trying his best and frankly doing a great job. Maybe he doesn’t want to date because of our situation. Because he thinks he has a responsibility. Anyway, our mom is working at a big company in London and my dad...well I don’t know where the hell he is after he packed his bags and right now, we are on our own here in Korea.

 

The reason for the party tonight is because Minho and his team will be competing in the National Soccer Championships and he had been dreaming about this his entire life.

 

“Hey! Do you want to play ball?”

“No! I am a girl, I don’t play ball. I play house oppa”

“Yeah right, the boring kind of stuff”

“Whatever”

“it is easy, you just have to kick this to that goal like this”

 

He kicked it so hard that the ball hit the tree which bounced back and hit my forehead. He laughed so hard at me because the ball left an imprint in my big forehead which made me cry and run to our mom

 

Minho is getting everything...great friends, great acads, and most importantly him being the star player of his team. It just amazes me how he can balance everything out

 

“Hey forehead! What are you thinking?”

 

Yups, he calls me ‘forehead’ ever since the incident. At first, it annoyed the hell out of me but I got used to it and sometimes, I call him ‘big eyes’ cause you know he has these big eyes that sometimes creeps me out when he stares at something. L

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Zereothia
#1
This is one of the best stories I've read on Onew so far! I love it so much that I'm re-reading it!! <3
Thank you so much for this story Author-nim!! :)
kmfonacier #2
Chapter 60: You've done everything so great :-D thank you saeng for the great stories :-) see you again next time :-D
bluestormysky
#3
Chapter 60: love the ending, great story. good job author nim. u gonna sign off? well, u r one of my favo writers. gonna miss ur story..
kmfonacier #4
Chapter 58: 4 years of writing.
4 years of being a subscriber and a friend saeng, you know how much I love your stories and how much I always complement each and every story you make. You must've thought this many times. Writing an story is not an issue thing. You would'nt know what will people will react on your story but you have good readers and they really love your story saeng. I hope you can still write when you have time. And I wish we can see each other again. It's been also 4 years since the last time we've seen each other saeng.... THANK YOU FOR WONDERFUL STORIE SAENG. LOVE YOU SO MUCH
zettyez #5
Chapter 58: Why my heart hurt seeing ur word signing off?
U must've think alot too. Keep writing if u hv time, ive always adored ur writing. Tq for the wonderful stories, u remained one of my best aff author. ;)
shankerider
#6
Chapter 57: Awww... But I don't want her to break up with Key just because of Onew. I hope that if they break up in the end, it will be because she doesn't think they are compatible but they will still remain friends. She and Onew shouldn't get back together so quickly... I think she should still finish her studies first, since she does enjoy fashion though not Paris so much. Oh no... What will happen next?
kmfonacier #7
Chapter 56: Oh sorry, chapter 56..... Hihihi
kmfonacier #8
Chapter 56: The last time I check you only had chapter 52, now its chapter 55? Waaaahhh~~~ you update fast saeng :-D I'm gonna read now.... Mwuah~~~!!!
zettyez #9
Chapter 56: Comeon pls let things work for onew n sara!
Im impressed again, authornim!
Nayc2307
#10
Chapter 54: Thank you for all the updates on till now. It's really sad for both of them..although everything works out fine now. I think Onew will never be able to let go of Sara because of his crush for her is not a thing of when they hooked up, but from long time ago. So he will need more than half year to get over her. And Sara...oh man she is now with Key....WHY?!?!?? heheh but Key is really charming here. Looks like something's going to happen in the 2 weeks......very curious... i really felt it in the way you wrote their meeting... oh if i was Sara i will be totally stuttering. Thanks again! I will patiently wait for your next update. Silly onew!