Twenty One

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ONEW’S POV

 

First day of being the team captain and some of the players are giving me a major headache. Coach was just watching me from the bench. I know he is testing me. If they want to win, then they have to listen and cooperate. They assigned me as their new captain for pete’s sake and I don’t lose. I never lose.

 

After several times of yelling at them and helping them, I looked at the crowd trying to spot Sara and there she is. She’s reading a book in her hands and she looks so beautiful specially when she tucks her hair behind her ear when the wind blows. got it so bad for her? yeah.  To be honest, I don’t know where this is going. I think asking her to be my girlfriend is too soon and I don’t know if I am ready for that. There will be the time I will this up and I can’t hurt her so I know this is safer.

 

She caught me smiling at her and she waved. How can someone be so beautiful? Since when did I get so dramatic over a girl? This is so not me. Time to hit the ball! And since I am a cocky bastard and wants to impress her, I am planning for a homerun and this one is for her but of course, I won’t tell her that. I ran as fast as I could and I almost feel like I am flying. Yeah may sound so gay but I love doing this. I love this sport and it makes me feel free and good at something. When I looked at her, she was so jumping and so happy for that one.

 

After maybe thirty minutes, we were dismissed and I went to her. Oh the dolphin girls are here today again and I swear I can almost feel my ears bleeding from their hideous screams. If only someone can rip their throats so they’ll shut up but I don’t care about them, I only care about one person here and she is in front of me, just finished her book and staring at me. Oh I know that face. She’s thinking about something and she is completely checking me out. Can I do a fist jump right now without her noticing, Hell yeah!

**

 

I always have a good time spending with her. We talk about a lot of things; we bicker oh that will never go away I think we live for that. And when I dropped her off their house, I was planning to go to an open bar and have some drinks. But as I was walking, I realized, I kinda miss her…Oh good Lord what has she done to me. I am not normally this cheesy, overly clingy guy. Hell she is not even my girlfriend to miss her like this but she just got me wrapped around her finger. Darn that woman

 

So I did go back to their house, and I remember she said that Minho might probably late today so she might be alone for a while. I need to make a dramatic yet overly romantic thing. Dating chicks, going out for a couple of days made me realize they like these stuffs where the guy sneaks in the back door to come over. Sometimes I think that’s a bunch of crap like why don’t you just let her sleep in your house? Less trouble for you. But maybe somehow, I get it. They like the effort and I am not that guy but somehow, Choi Sara had me all confused with myself.

 

I knocked on her window but she didn’t respond. I totally know she’s inside. Her side lamp is still on and I hear the movement. What’s taking her so long? Several knocks and she’s still not opening her damn window. Is she do

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Zereothia
#1
This is one of the best stories I've read on Onew so far! I love it so much that I'm re-reading it!! <3
Thank you so much for this story Author-nim!! :)
kmfonacier #2
Chapter 60: You've done everything so great :-D thank you saeng for the great stories :-) see you again next time :-D
bluestormysky
#3
Chapter 60: love the ending, great story. good job author nim. u gonna sign off? well, u r one of my favo writers. gonna miss ur story..
kmfonacier #4
Chapter 58: 4 years of writing.
4 years of being a subscriber and a friend saeng, you know how much I love your stories and how much I always complement each and every story you make. You must've thought this many times. Writing an story is not an issue thing. You would'nt know what will people will react on your story but you have good readers and they really love your story saeng. I hope you can still write when you have time. And I wish we can see each other again. It's been also 4 years since the last time we've seen each other saeng.... THANK YOU FOR WONDERFUL STORIE SAENG. LOVE YOU SO MUCH
zettyez #5
Chapter 58: Why my heart hurt seeing ur word signing off?
U must've think alot too. Keep writing if u hv time, ive always adored ur writing. Tq for the wonderful stories, u remained one of my best aff author. ;)
shankerider
#6
Chapter 57: Awww... But I don't want her to break up with Key just because of Onew. I hope that if they break up in the end, it will be because she doesn't think they are compatible but they will still remain friends. She and Onew shouldn't get back together so quickly... I think she should still finish her studies first, since she does enjoy fashion though not Paris so much. Oh no... What will happen next?
kmfonacier #7
Chapter 56: Oh sorry, chapter 56..... Hihihi
kmfonacier #8
Chapter 56: The last time I check you only had chapter 52, now its chapter 55? Waaaahhh~~~ you update fast saeng :-D I'm gonna read now.... Mwuah~~~!!!
zettyez #9
Chapter 56: Comeon pls let things work for onew n sara!
Im impressed again, authornim!
Nayc2307
#10
Chapter 54: Thank you for all the updates on till now. It's really sad for both of them..although everything works out fine now. I think Onew will never be able to let go of Sara because of his crush for her is not a thing of when they hooked up, but from long time ago. So he will need more than half year to get over her. And Sara...oh man she is now with Key....WHY?!?!?? heheh but Key is really charming here. Looks like something's going to happen in the 2 weeks......very curious... i really felt it in the way you wrote their meeting... oh if i was Sara i will be totally stuttering. Thanks again! I will patiently wait for your next update. Silly onew!