Intruder

The Witch's Curse
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"There are hickies all over him," Lacey whispered to Luhan. After Luhan used his mind to move the unconscious boy to Lacey's room (because it was the least dustiest), they had been watching over him, waiting for him to wake up. Lay was covered head to toe in sweat and hickies, there were even bind marks around his ankles and wrists. Thinking about whatever happened to him while he was trapped caused Lacey to shudder. It was obvious to her what had happened.    "Unicorns are pure animals. Innocent and kind. I'm guessing his punishment was something very… impure. I'm pshycic, meaning my powers have something do with me using my mind. So my punishment was a raging headache." Luhan informed her.   Lacey bit her lip. Having to live with a headache for thousands of years? She's had countless amounts of headaches before but they only lasted a day or less. She couldn't imagine trying to endure one for millennia. As for Lay? She already knew what that impure punishment was.    That witch certainly did want them to suffer, but what Lacey wanted to know was why? What had they done? Did they commit a terrible crime? Looking back at Lay, she mentally shook her head at the thought. It couldn't be, like what Luhan said, Lay was a unicorn and they were innocent animals.    So why punish someone innocent?    "He's waking up," Snapping her head up at the sound of Luhan's voice, she looked back Lay. His eyes were fluttering, struggling to open. As he tried to gain consciousness, Lacey took this as her chance to inspect him.    He was definitely Asian, fair skinned like Luhan, brown hair matted with sweat, and innocent brown eyes. When they finally opened, Lacey could see the trepidation and anxiety in the poor guy's eyes. Too much had happened to him in the many years he was trapped.    The first thing he did was let out a shaky breath. Eyes locking with Luhan's, he felt his eyes light up with recognition. Then they maneuvered over to Lacey. Although he knew Lacey was his savior, he couldn't help but shiver in fear from seeing another girl. Throughout the millennia, his punishment was to be ravished by faceless females. He could remember it all, the wicked giggling, the nails running down his back and chest, the greedy hands...    "My name's Lacey." She said with an accent. "You're free now. You're going to be okay." Although he could detect the nervousness in her voice, her soothing words swayed him. Looking around the room, he didn't see black, he didn't see chains or rope, he was out of his cage.    Lacey wasn't sure if she said the right things because right after she finished her sentence, Lay's innocent brown eyes started to water. Uh oh. Straightening up, she watched with wide eyes as Lay began to sob. Did I say something wrong? Please let these be tears of happiness!    Much to her relief, they were. With a choked up voice, he said gratefully, "Tha-thank you! Thank you, thank you!" It was a never ending mantra, him always repeating those words. Sitting up, he wiped his eyes and sniffled, still repeating those words.    "My name is Yixing. Zhang Yixing." He said, his lips quivering, but he was no longer sobbing. "But you can call me Lay."    "Well Lay... There's a few things I have to explain to you." Lacey gulped.    "But first, I need you to heal our savior." Luhan said, gingerly holding out Lacey's blood caked hands in front of the unicorn.    Lay bobbed his head, "Of course, I will do anything for you, Lacey." The teen could feel her cheeks heat up at his declaration of devotion. Well he definitely is grateful... His hands outsretched for hers and she was able to see his unicorn symbol tattooed in the palm of his right hand.   A green glow emitted from both of his hands, out of instinct she jumped and pulled her hands back, but Luhan held her hands firmly. "Don't worry, he's healing you." He assured her.    Lacey nodded her head in understanding, watching in awe as the cuts on her skin sealed itself in a slow manner. The glow disappeared after a few seconds. All her cuts were gone and her hands looked as good as new. Lay leaned back against the headboard and sighed, a small smile on his face. "It's been so long since I used my powers..."    Luhan cleared his throat, "So um, there's something really important that you need to know..." He trailed off, sending Lacey glances at the corner of his eyes.    Lay looked expectantly at them.    Lacey gulped audibly. Must get this over with… "Lay, you're no longer in Exo."    Lay only furrowed his brows in confusion. "I'm not—what? What do you mean?" He leaned closer.    Again, she gulped. "The witch sent you all to Earth. A world of humans. I'm... I'm human."   Lay only stared at her in shock. Blinking in disbelief, he turned his head to face Luhan. Then back at Lacey. Doing the same thing Luhan did, he cr
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preciousloey61
#1
Chapter 38: It was so amazing and funny story..full of suspense and mystery...specially each of the rescuing events and it's horrendous moments..omg.. got goosebumps while reading...amazingly well written everything..really enjoyed reading the whole story from beginning till this chapter... specifically really loved lacey's bold, smart, bravery and funny character... loved the way she freed each and every boys except till kyungsoo without any judgment about their past faults and punishments....Kang jinhee, her character was so interesting and mysterious... sometimes it actually seemed she was a bad, evil and insane woman for what she did to them.. but after each of boys confession about their past mistakes, it was like they deserved that but not to that hard extent that they had to go through such pain and trauma....felt so bad for all of them.. but loved it that she courageously saved them from the cage and also from the whole situation during their freeing time... it was painful and heartbreaking..but one good thing about this that they changed after that long period of their imprisonment....basement, giant spider part and all the all events like that was so shocking and fearsome... it actually horrified me..haha.. it was like i was watching some horror movies...but some events and specially their weird acts were super hilarious..couldn't stop laughing...but kang's descendants were so scary and dangerous... also their actions... really loved their caring, protective and understanding friendly nature.. it was hard but loved the way she provided everything for them... suho's caring and lovely motherly nature.. that daughter zone part was hilarious..couldn't stop laughing...he's indeed a funny guy... xiumin , the cute guy and his eating and working out part was funny... lay, the innocent and healing unicorn..so sweet and cute guy..hehe.. felt bad for baekhyun..hope he get back his power... but loved his smart character... chanyeol's part was both heartbreaking and heartwarming... his part was so amazingly written... and cause of his part she got new ability too.. in a good or maybe quite scary way though... but it proved helpful too... he's super cute, funny, curious and awesome boy... loved his character so much... jongdae's part was amazingly well written... sehun's part really broke my heart but the way he recovered later and helped them was so awesome... kai's part turned things out quite awkward maybe.. his sudden appearance and that incident.. scary.. but glad that she was safe... their instant reaction on that incident was quite heartwarming but hilarious... loved tao's funny act parts...he was so cute and funny.. really loved luhan's character from the beginning till this chapter... all of his actions, acts and all the sad or funny events.. first freed man from the cage.. loved the way he never ever leave her side and helped her all the way long... omg.. jinx chapter parts were both funny and scary... funny cause the four boys nonstop curious cat acts and thoughts..also food lovers part..hahaha..poor lacey..scary cause of the events that the rest of the boys were facing in that small room full of spiders and without their powers... also kyungsoo's symbol... really curious about his upcoming appearance...hope lacey and other four boys arrive on time to save the boys and last cage of kyungsoo from the witches...I really enjoyed reading the whole time... worth reading... so excited and curious about the situation, kyungsoo's rescue Part and what will happen when lacey's parents will be back home... thank you authornim for writing such an amazing, catchy, interesting and mysterious story... will patiently wait for next update.. take care of yourself and fighting authornim ❤️ 🤗😍🫶🤩❤️
HoneyFei20
#2
When are you going to update this story again? We all miss reading this story. :)
pandalovespandaheart
#3
Chapter 38: Had read this like 5 or 6 times already and it's still enjoyable. Still praying to continue this story. It's really good.
EdwardHisTopazEyes
#4
Chapter 38: I just adore this fan fiction. Learning about each of the boys stories and their punishments are riveting to read. I truly hope you can continue this fic whenever you decide to write for it again.
Byuntae-bacon #5
i haven’t read this in a while but i randomly thought about it again. i really hope that you update and finish it soon. this book is super good and i’m definitely gonna reread it 5 more times lol
staceygwen #6
Chapter 38: They definitely aren’t doing well Lacey, cone back quickly and save them. And meet the newest member of the gang.

I just realized this after rereading the entire story again but the song sheet which is Jongdae’s cage seem to have came from ‘Pandora’s Heart’ a anime song also known as ‘Lacie’ in the series, It came after I search the songs and everything.

Ummm.. I don’t really know what’s gonna happen onwards with the story as it already half a decade since the last update. But I just wanna say that it’s a wonderful story and I.. we really love ? it, and that will wait for whatever decision you’ll make as it is your story. We will respect your decision and best regards to you Author-nim.

P.S Thank you for the wonderful story and Stay Safe
aliceinchanyeolland #7
Chapter 38: I just found this story not long ago and finish the latest chapter just now! This story is so good, really love it! Thank you for producing such a fun story for us to read authornim, i hope you would update again soon ?❤️
Jaceywiebe #8
Chapter 38: I just found this story and I’m really enjoying it! Even though it’s been a long time I hope you can still update it and I’ll be waiting for it when you do!