Rafael's Intentions

THE SIREN (Completed)
EXT. ISLAND - WATERFALL - SOME TIME LATER

The three were exhausted from their swim. They were content
to lounge on some large smooth rocks by the water’s edge.
Lena was busy reading a book but Rafael was adamant in
getting her attention. Tinay is on one side busy fiddling
with Rafael’s I-pod. She has earphones on, to purposely not
hear their conversation.

LENA
Ano ang tinitingin-tingin mo diyan?

RAFAEL
Sorry, I can’t help but stare, ikaw
na kasi ang pinaka-magandang babae
na nakita ko sa tanang buhay ko.

LENA
Alam mo bolero ka! Buti na lang
hindi ka nag-artista kasi hindi ka
marunong umarte na parang inosente.

RAFAEL
Hindi ako dumidiskarte uy, totoo
yung mga sinasabi ko.

LENA
Okay, alam ko naman yun eh.

RAFAEL
Nagka-boyfriend ka na ba?

LENA
Oo, marami na.

RAFAEL
Talaga, ilan?

LENA
Ang dalagang Pilipina ay hindi
nagsasabi kung ilan na ang naging
boyfriend niya.

RAFAEL
Eto naman, masyadong seryoso. Kahit
estimate lang. Less than five?

LENA
More than 10, less than 20. Okay
na ba iyon?

RAFAEL
Ganoon kadami?

LENA
Bakit, ilan na ba naging girlfriend mo?

RAFAEL
Tatlo. Yung huli muntik na akong
pikutin.

LENA
Buti nga sa iyo.

RAFAEL
(changes the topic)
Alam mo, may pact kami ni Enzo.

LENA
Ano iyon?

RAFAEL
Hindi kami basta-basta magdadala na
kung sinu-sinong babae dito.

LENA
Hindi kaya siya magalit na andito ako.

RAFAEL
Hindi naman. Ang sabi kasi namin,
yung espesyal lang sa amin ang
dadalhin namin dito.

Lena remains quiet...

RAFAEL
Lena, papayagan mo ba akong
manligaw sa iyo?

LENA
Ha? Ang bilis mo naman, hindi mo
pa nga ako kilala ng lubusan...

RAFAEL
Kaya nga ako manliligaw eh. Hindi
naman kita pinipilit na sagutin
kaagad ako. Yun sa akin lang ay
para magka-kilanlan tayo. At para
na rin maipakita sa iyo na malinis
ang intensiyon ko.

LENA
Seryoso ka?

RAFAEL
Seryoso.

SERIES OF SHOTS

EXT. SEA SHORE - DAY

Lena is seen reading Lolo’s book at the beach. Rafael
emerges with coconut juice and offers one to Lena. She
smiles back at him.

EXT. ISLAND MANSION‘S GARDEN - DAY

By the lawn chairs and tables, Lena, Rafael and two couples
are playing chess with one another. They were all enjoying.

ENZO (VO)
Hindi naglaon ay naging mas
mapalagay na ang loob ni Lena sa
"pamilya". Unti-unti na rin niyang
nakakalimutan ang madilim niyang
nakalipas...

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