A Heart Divided

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AHeartDivided

 ♦ In dedication to my chingu Sara ♦ 

 


Sara is just an average girl who wants to be with the person she likes. Theres nothing wrong with asking your best friend to help you fulfill your love life.....is there? Well, what if your best friend is that of the opposite ? Is everything still ok?

Difficulties may arise as Sara struggles between the love of her life long best friend and the love of a sweet and charming guy.

But is this guy as charming as Sara thinks, or could he have an alternative motive?


 

Characters

 

Sara

age: around 17-18

best friends with the same guy since elementary school; best friends name is Onew

mistaken by people as the girlfriend of Onew; awkward when meeting someone for the first time; 

innocent when it comes to love, dating and relationships; has never been in a relationship; pure and sweet;

lives next door to best friend; always feels cold; likes the warm sun and looking at the sky on sunny days;

emotional on the inside but portrays a strong character for others to see;

not extraordinarily beautiful but still very pretty;

a very simple girl; easily impressed;

only calls Onew "Oppa" when she wants something; sometimes uses aegyo, but thinks she fails at aegyo because of Onew's criticism

 

 

 

 

Onew

age:18

protective of his best friend, especially when it comes to boys; best friends with Sara;

 lives next door to best friend; easy to talk to; very good looking;

a modest guy; sociable; popular among girls and guys but not as noticeable since hes always with Sara;

chicken obsessed; always feels cold; has moments when he does or says something, making a situation awkward;

given the nickname "Dubu" by Jonghyun; friends with Jonghyun; recognizes Jonghyun's real intentions;

always comforts his best friend when needed; can see through Sara's "strong" character; 

sometimes speaks brutally to his best friend, but never to intentionally hurt her feelings;

has been secretly in love with his best friend since the first year of middle school;

claims he hates Sara's aegyo, but in reality he finds it really cute, and doesn't want anyone else to see it (especially boys)

 

 

 

 

Jonghyun

age: early 18

pursues to be with Sara and make her his;

extremely attractive; extremely popular among all females who see him;

recognizes his good looks and uses them to his advantage, but doesn't appear cocky; deep down is sincerely sweet and a good person;

because of his sweetness its easy for him to charm girls without trying;

doesn't neglect any girl that approaches him; goes after what he wants;

doesn't like to take "no" for an answer; likes the innocent type of girls;

known not to stay in relationships for long; gets bored easily; likes to be alone with the girl he likes or finds attractive; 

his true feelings for Sara are unclear and mixed as he gets to know her more; 

is friends with Onew; recognizes that Onew is his competition; 

gave Onew the nickname of "Dubu" because of his soft skin; really likes skinship

 

 

 

 

Hyosung

agearound 18-19

in the year above Sara, Onew, and Jonghyun (sunbae);  tends to get loud when shes happy or exited;

calls Onew "Oppa" even though she's older; playfully hits/pushes guys when she's embarrassed (habit);

a really fun person; likes to hang out and have fun; life of the party; can keep a conversation going; makes friends easily;

is a er for sad romantic love stories; cries during movies when something emotional happens; 

likes to dress really feminine and womanly; acts girly but sometimes tomboyish(depending on the situation);

is really pretty; popular with both female and male students; very modest girl; sociable; nice to everyone; doesn't like players;

has a voluptuous body, but doesn't expose herself in a bad way (keeps it classy); has a good reputation; doesn't flirt with guy's just for attention;

doesn't desire a relationship based on naivety; is honest; likes to help people; is able to tell when someone is having a hard time; 

loyal to her friends; is close friends with Onew; knows about Onew's feelings for Sara; pities Sara for being so innocent; 

secretly keeping an eye on Sara to make sure she's safe; doesn't trust Jonghyun

 

Foreword


A/N: The foreword is long but it's quick to read. dont worry lol. it's a side story for the main story.


"Oppa~"

"Hmm?"

Onew turns and looks at me with a suspicious face, waiting for what I'm going to say next. I give out a loud whine and say, "Oppa I'm collldddd~"

"Aishh! This girl! I told you it was going to be cold today,  It's only the beginning of winter, the days will get colder from now on Sara."  He spoke in a slow and sarcastic tone, making me feel like i was dumb and not able to comprehend.

"Yah! don't say it in that tone! I know its getting colder!.......it's always cold!!" I puff up my cheeks and cross my arms across my chest to show my frustration to Onew.

"Stop that," He says 

"Stop what?"

Onew takes off his scarf, walks over to me and starts to wrap it gently around my neck as he says, "Your 'aegyo', if you can even call that aegyo, it doesn't suit you. So stop it." He pulls my hair out of the scarf and brings it to the front.

So he says, "it doesn't suit me", but he always ends up doing what I want.... Pabo.  The streets are crowded as we walk, I dont even know where we are, so I just follow Onew in hopes that he knows..... he probably doesn't know either. 

*THUD*.....*THUD*

I reach out my hands in an attempt to grab something quick, as I feel my self loosing my footing as people bump past me. I'm going to fall!  *grabs* I'm looking up at Onew now as he holds on to my waist, preventing me from falling down. You need to be more sturdy! how can you fall so easily?! This is why I tell you to be careful, guys feed on girls who are clumsy! He starts to walk but turns around again to grab my hand and says, You might get lost next.

*bu-dump, bu-dump* Wait.....what? Whats with the "bu-dump" ? Somehow I feel weird as he holds my hand, but its not the first time we have held hands, he always treats me like a little girl, so why am I feeling like this? Just forget it. it will pass.

"Yah! Give me my scarf back," He says as he stops walking and grabs on to the end of the scarf. "WAE?! I'm cold! Why do you want it?" I grab on the the scarf and try to get his hand off.

"Because I'm cold now! Give it back!"

"ANI! I'm still cold! Your a guy so it up like a man!!" Oops, I think that might have hurt his pride a little bit. 

"What did you just say?"

"Nothing"

"LIAR! give it back you don't deserve my kindness anymore!"

"IM SORRY,"​ I put my hands together and start rubbing them like Super Junior, "Sorry, sorry, sorry, sorr-"

"Alright. Just come here," He pulls my arm and we walk to this little booth that's selling scarf's.

He goes up to the little cute old lady at the booth and asks, "Excuse me, how much is that scarf right there?" He points to an indigo colored knitted scarf as he takes out his wallet.  It's pretty, it looks so soft and warm.

"It's 20000 won young man"

"What! For a scarf!" I say in disbelief. Onew turns and gives me a sharp look. Oops I think i embarrassed him a little, sorry.

The cute little old lady looks at me, great now I made her feel bad, sorry~

"I know its a little pricey, but all the scarf's are hand made by me. This one was made with 100% cotton. Since it was hand made, its also one of a kind."

Onew looks at me with an 'you should have kept your mouth shut'  type of look.

"Oh I see, well they are really pretty and look very soft," I say 

"I'll take it," Onew says while giving her the money.

"Would you like it wrapped?"

"No thank you, she's going to put it on right now."

"Oh I see, well this scarf will look really pretty on your girlfriend, especially with her pretty hair color,"

"Oh! were not dating, but thank you for your kind words," I quickly correct her.  "Oh I'm sorry, you two just look good together, but please have a good day dears, and come again."

"Neh, kamsahamnida," I say as I wave goodbye.

 

I turn to Onew and say, "Aigoo, I wonder when people will stop confusing us as a couple. It's getting annoying isn't it,"

"Ha ha, neh,"

"Gomawo for the scarf~"

"Yea, now give me my scarf back,"

I hand him his scarf back and put on my new scarf, it really is soft. Onew grabs my hand again because the streets are still very crowded. For the rest of the day we continued to walk just like that, on a street i still didn't know.

Its a beautiful thing, our friendship, and I will do anything to protect it forever.


 

 

Author's Note:

hi lovelies~ I was posting this fanfic on my Instagram before, but know I wont be able to post it there for a long time due to my certain circumstances that my followers on IG know. Many are waiting for the next chapter so updates on this fanfic will be fast until i can reach the chapter that I was up to on IG. Please support me if you like my stories by subscribing and up-voting my stories. Thank you for reading this ^_^

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flaming260297 #1
Chapter 29: I just finished reading ur story dear authir-nim. And aaaaa i cried!!!T.T this story is soooooooooo great!amazing. Really!i mean it><
From chapter 1 until chapter 23 i hate jonghyun soooooo much. But why in chapter 24 u make him looks so kind and lovely?
Aaaaah sara is acyually his first love!how sweeet:') I love jjong!
I love onew's character too, he's just so romanticcc. And Sara too. Ah and our hyosung unnie tooo. Aah!i just love all of your character.

I really enjoy and loved to reading ur story. I'll upvote for u!:*
lovescomplicate #2
Chapter 29: Finally they are together! When I read this story it remind me of my situation its not the same but it remind me of someone
afiercesong #3
Oh my feels!
lacus_clyne
#4
Chapter 29: wo hoo . . nice ending^^
no more drama and to the point
hahahaha
eunji and onew together
i hope have someone like onew in this story
you make me jealous, author >_<
lacus_clyne
#5
Chapter 26: oh my god
it's too late!!!!????
sara . . . TT.TT
onew,,, why you didn't do anything?
stop her
jonghyun!!!!
why he did that!!!!!?????
lacus_clyne
#6
Chapter 22: oh my god
i hope nothing bad will happen to sara
onew why you like this
such a coward
upsate soon
lacus_clyne
#7
Chapter 21: really love this story
i'm so curious the next story
update soon please^^
Shawol-Julia #8
Chapter 21: JONGHYUN WANT TO DO IT WITH SARA ?! SUCH A F***ING BASTARD ! AND ALSO ERT ! ( Sorry for the ugly english :) , i have my moments :) ).Update !
Shawol-Julia #9
Chapter 19: Hmmmmm.....Jonghyun is 'a little' awkard.A little for me means A LOT.He is hiding something.Soemthing TOO OBVIOUS for Sara !