Rain

7 minutes in HEAVEN? [DISCONTINUED]

Miko driving slowly when she arrives at the beginning of Kedavra Street. She looks at her right and left, looking for Mina’s car and a house that they mention before. But, all she can see is dark forest. Suddenly she heard a dog howling from the forest. Miko shocked and suddenly shivered.

 

She drives slowly and out of sudden, it’s raining. The rains start to down pour so fast. Miko can’t see what’s in front of her because of the rain. So, she has to stop her car at side of the road. She hates having blurry vision at night. She reach out her cellphone on the dashboard and call for Mina. She tries to call Mina for several times but fails. All she got is the busy tone.

 

“Mina is talking to who?” Miko thought at herself. Maybe the mechanics, she said again. Then, she tries to call Eun Soo. After a few seconds, Eun Soo picks up the phone.

 

“Hello Eun Soo, do you already got the mechanics number?” Miko asked Eun Soo.

 

There is silent at Eun Soo’ side. Miko asked again, “Eun Soo, do you hear me? Hello? Hello?”

 

Suddenly there is loud noise coming out from her cellphone. The sound is like someone tries tuning the radio. Then Iefa hears croaks and different voices screamings. After that she hears someone laughing and a dog howling.

 http://www.flickr.com/photos/afifahadilah/4655626124/ [This is how the sound like. Please hear it first before continue reading]

 

Miko throws her cellphone because she is too shocked. She looks at her cellphone which is under the passenger seat beside her. She was afraid to take her phone again. She reaches her hand slowly to her cellphone and picks it. She puts her cellphone to her ear very slowly. Then she tries to hear the voices again. But there just silent in the phone.

 

She looks at the screen of the phone. ‘Eun Soo’ name display on the screen. I dial the right number, Miko thinking to herself. But why are those voices coming from the phone? Miko looks out through the windows. The rain is still downpour heavily and the wind is quite strong out there. Miko still can’t drive because she can’t see a thing and the street is very dark. Not much of light pole were put along this street. She sighs and hoping that everything gonna be alright. She thinking of Mina, Jihye, Jaeri, Winnie and Hyojin conditions and praying that they also gonna be alright. Miko’s look so scared when she see the dark forest. She doesn’t want to stay long at this place so she decides to continue driving but very slowly and carefully. She cannot let anything happen to them so she starts her engine and drive slowly along the Kedavra Street.

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AUTHOR NOTE: Hi~~!! When I open my profile, I literally crying because finally there people commented my story.. T.T ..Thanks~! I started to think to delete this when I though nobody reading it.. Well, new chapter is up.. Short chapter again. I hope you will ready my story patiently... Thank you a lot because you still support my fic~~! So, Enjoy~~!!!

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So, I was thinking to revamp this old fic.. make new application and all.. what say you?

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baesuzysbae
#1
AUTHORNIM I LOVE IT!
JASDCV
#2
Chapter 43: Omg no way!! I can't believe you're actually doing this. No one is mad at you and we understand that you just lost interest. But it's the fact that you came back that it deserves a lot of respect.

All the love always!! And good luck!
KunoichiHakira666
#3
Chapter 43: Ummmmaaa~~~

I was so shocked to see an update notification for this. It's not been updated for almost as long as my first apply fic, 'I Can't Let You Go' ehaha... ^^"

Even if you don't finish it all at once, I think you should do it if that's what you want to do. I mean, I only have one completed story on here (and all of my other accounts) and it's the first story I wrote - over 6 years ago. I finished it over a weekend, but looking back at it (something I've only done once) it was horrible.

I say go for it! I enjoyed this story the first time round, so I bet your next one will be even better. I will definitely read it, and apply if you make it an apply fic. You'll have to let me know when/if you get around to posting it.

Fighting! <3
cericeria #4
Chapter 39: the story is just so cool...daebak!!im getting more and more curious..so pls update very very soon author-nim! kekkekeke. fighting! ^^
mrskimjaejoong
#5
Chapter 39: We're all reunited again. I wonder what the sound is. Update soon.
JASDCV
#6
Chapter 39: Im glad that u are continuing wth the story.
I hope u apdate soon again :)
KunoichiHakira666
#7
I was really shocked to see this updated. Like, you don't even know
(,,#゚Д゚)
mrskimjaejoong
#8
You updated. I thought you abandoned the story. Love the chapters so far. Update soon.
JASDCV
#9
Yay u updated!!
JASDCV
#10
I love this story
I couldn't stop reading!!
I finished it in like 2 hrs...
Plz update soon. =D