Scream

7 minutes in HEAVEN? [DISCONTINUED]

After walks across the dark forest, Miko arrives at the house. She looks around the house. The house looks very creepy inside and outside. When her eyes roaming around the house, Miko shocked when she sees graves not very far from the house. Feeling weird about that, she’s quickly climbs the stairs and knocks the door.

 

Miko knocks for several times but no one answer. She then says, “Hello. My name is Miko . It is my friend’s car outside at the road. Her name is Mina. I come to pick them all up,”

 

There is only silent inside the house. Miko frowns and thinking where are they. She slid her hand in the pocket and takes out her cellphone. Miko is about to call Mina and suddenly she hears someone screams.

 

“Weirdo!”

 

Then she hears a loud thumps coming from in the house. Miko shocks because she recognize that voice. It is Winnie's voice. Miko opens the front door and called for Winnie. Miko wants to go upstairs and suddenly someone pull her arm. Her body jerks a bit and she tries to get off her hand from this man.

 

“Who are you? Where are my friends? What you did to them?” Miko shouts at this man.

 

The man just remain silent. But his eyes change from black to brown and light brown. He keeps staring at Miko and grips her arm tightly.

 

Miko bears the pain when the man keeping his grips on her arm even more tightly. She tries to pull her hand from the grip but failed. Miko yells at him again.

 

“Where are my friends?”

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AUTHOR NOTES: Hi~~! New update~! But this time a short chapter.. Sorry~! I think I'm having trouble with my fic. >.< I should plan my fic very well.. Now, I'm stuck in the middle confused which character I want to focus and the story itself...Hurm.. Hope I will get some ideas.. Happy reading~! Love you all~~~~~~~~!

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Iefa_San
So, I was thinking to revamp this old fic.. make new application and all.. what say you?

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baesuzysbae
#1
AUTHORNIM I LOVE IT!
JASDCV
#2
Chapter 43: Omg no way!! I can't believe you're actually doing this. No one is mad at you and we understand that you just lost interest. But it's the fact that you came back that it deserves a lot of respect.

All the love always!! And good luck!
KunoichiHakira666
#3
Chapter 43: Ummmmaaa~~~

I was so shocked to see an update notification for this. It's not been updated for almost as long as my first apply fic, 'I Can't Let You Go' ehaha... ^^"

Even if you don't finish it all at once, I think you should do it if that's what you want to do. I mean, I only have one completed story on here (and all of my other accounts) and it's the first story I wrote - over 6 years ago. I finished it over a weekend, but looking back at it (something I've only done once) it was horrible.

I say go for it! I enjoyed this story the first time round, so I bet your next one will be even better. I will definitely read it, and apply if you make it an apply fic. You'll have to let me know when/if you get around to posting it.

Fighting! <3
cericeria #4
Chapter 39: the story is just so cool...daebak!!im getting more and more curious..so pls update very very soon author-nim! kekkekeke. fighting! ^^
mrskimjaejoong
#5
Chapter 39: We're all reunited again. I wonder what the sound is. Update soon.
JASDCV
#6
Chapter 39: Im glad that u are continuing wth the story.
I hope u apdate soon again :)
KunoichiHakira666
#7
I was really shocked to see this updated. Like, you don't even know
(,,#゚Д゚)
mrskimjaejoong
#8
You updated. I thought you abandoned the story. Love the chapters so far. Update soon.
JASDCV
#9
Yay u updated!!
JASDCV
#10
I love this story
I couldn't stop reading!!
I finished it in like 2 hrs...
Plz update soon. =D