The girls are debuting.

It was 'You' from the beginning

 

Time flew so fast. Today is Paradise's debut and their first time standing on stage as a group.


Anxiety and pressure rised in the atmosophere as their mannager told that there were only minutes
left for them to get ready.


They want everything to be perfect but they know they can't elope from the audience's critisism.

*At the bakstage *


"I'm worried girls ! " Popi muttered.
"Same here. But we should be confidant since we've been well trained." Minah said.
"What if no one comes to cheer us? "Aria said frightened.
"Just believe in yourself as Minah said girls. We worked hard during the bygone days so everything
will turn out well." Mery heartened them.
"Let's make of it an incridible performance girls. "Marilou added.


*Group Hug*


"Ohh Sunbaenims are here ! " Marilou said .


SHINee, SNSD and Super Junior all came to wath their Hoobaes debut stage.


The girls were at the verge of crying and felt warmed by their sunbaenims support.


"Thanks for coming , it really means a lot for us." Mery expressed her gratitute.
"Do your best girls and make us proud. " Leeteuk said.


"We're looking forward to an outstanding performance. " Tifanny said.

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"Just keep belief in yoursefl. I'm sure you're going to do well . " Onew encouraged but his eyes
were only fixed on Minah.



"It's time for you to go up on stage girls. " The mannager said.


"Good Luck." Everyone shouted.

*Forward*
At Paradise's dorm.

"I can't believe that all these fans came to watch us." Mery said.
"Neither do I. I haven't predicted we could have at least one fan before our debut." Marilou
claimed.
"I'm still in shiver. I was about to faint on stage seeing all those people's eyes fixed on us." Popi muttered.
"This is one more reason for us to work even harder." Minah said.
"I can't believe I'm already done after our first performance. No wonder I wouldn't face up to this
survival. " Aria added.
"Stop complaining girls. I'm sure we can do it if we gather as one " Minah cheered the girls.
"You better go to sleep . It's been a hectic day for all of us. "Mery said.
"Goodnight."
 
Minutes later the girls dozed off .

 

 

A short chapter.

Miane chingus I haven't made up my mind yet about how to complete this story.

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chicken_maniac_onew #1
luv this story!!! fighting!!! :)
Kpopsaffy #2
Wow your story rocks! I'm on chapter 3 gonna keep reading ;) !!!!!! Great job umi!
DazzlingJuliette
#3
I WANNA GO TO NEW CALEDONIA... OMG ONEW JUST DO IT YOU FREAK HEAD... TAEMIN PLAYING GAMES BWUAHAHHA.... EEEEEEEEEP
Umi-Archangel #4
Hhahah I want to be a member of SM Family too :p
I'll try to update tomorrow or after tomorrow !
jlee14
#5
Omo~ Mr. SM is really awesome!!! I can't wait to see what they're gonna do! I wish I was a part of SM.....Haha!

PS: I can sooo imagine Taeminnie playing games on an airplane! xD
jlee14
#6
I'm still reading! And I love it! Minah and Onew FTW!
keyluva4eva #7
Please. Update. Soon.
THE WAIT IS KILLING ME!
Umi-Archangel #8
I'm happy chingu <3 I'm going to work hard in order to have more ! :)
DazzlingJuliette
#9
naaaaws... u now have 8 subs gud job
Umi-Archangel #10
I'm glad you liked it.
Keep supporting <3