Confession and Rejection (FULL)

Perfect Formula Like You And Me

 

Authors' Note: Subbies! DO COMMENT... I'm not recieving any comments since weeks ago~ Todays' TEEN TOP's 2nd win!! CONGRATULATIONS.

No One POV

 

The next day in school was a long one, especially with Jieun sitting beside you. She kept blabbering about how good was Onew to her. She continued her blabbering for 3 hours in class while you continued smiling at her, acting as if you were fine. You werent okay. However she made it pretty more worse by saying, "I'm gonna confess to Oppa today. Should I, Hyemin??" You nodded and asked her to follow her heart. You were very very jealous inside and felt like crying.

- Recess Time -

Jieun tugged your hand, "PPALLI. LET'S GO!! Help me okay! I dont know why but nowadays he dont even look at me. Aiish. Help me ask him to come here alrights! Thanks Hyemin~~~" You nodded as you walked away to search for Onew. You finally found him sleeping under a tree. 'Why is he sleeping here,' you thought. You called out, "ONEW OPPA." Onew flinched and jumped up from his sleep. You chuckled, "Oppa. You're so funny."

Onew blushed a little and asked, "YAH...! Why are you here? Arent you supposed to be with Jonghyunnie and the rest for recess?" You shook your head, "Aniya.. I have a mission to do today.. Its for you! Uh.. go to the school locker room, and you'll know whats my surprise okay!" You ran away as you couldnt control yourself from trembling. You sent off your crush to his once crush. Other people may see you as crazy but you find that as long as he's happy. You are too.

Uncertainly, Onew walked to the locker room. At the entrance was Jieun standing there. As soon as she caught Onew in her sight, she waved, "I called you to come here and find me." He walked closer to her. On the other side, Hyemin was feeling jelly and decided to take a U-turn back to go to the locker room, well... to "eavesdrop". 

She got a safe place and started listening to what they were talking about. Onew asked, "Why did you ask me to come here?" Ji Eun smiled and shook her head, "Aniya... I was thinking of giving you a little surprise.." Onew, looking confused, questioned her, "Mwo? What surprise?" Out of a sudden, Ji Eun started to sing:

I like you, I like you

For some reason, I get a rush whenever I see you
My heart pounds all the time
It feels like it will burst when I hug you
My entire body trembles

* Tonight - no, tomorrow night as well
Hide in my embrace, come into my dreams
Softly knock so that no one else will know
I will quietly open only for you

I am gently rustling at your scent 
(At this atmosphere) I think I will become intoxicated
The small candles that are lit one by one are flickering and being put out

When I say "hello?" and knock, open the door that was once closed
Be my cotton blanket that will melt my frozen heart

Tonight as well (I like you)
Hide in my embrace, come into my dreams
Softly knock (I like you)
I will quietly open only for you

Tonight as well (I like you)
Hide in my embrace, come into my dreams

Onew and you was stunned, Onew know what this meant ---- Confession. Well, you... you were thinking of how great she was and how you couldnt matxh up to her. Ji Eun smiled, "So Onew oppa.. will you accept me?" Onew was speechless, VERY speechless. The only person on his mind now was YOU, HYEMIN. Onew stuttered awkwardly, "Ji Eun-ah.... I..." He looked at the anticipating girl, "I cannot lie to you or lie to myself about my feelings. I have someone I like already. I... moved on, Ji Eun."

Ji Eun, who was upset, gave a fake smile, "Ah, oppa, I was just joking. I used you as a rehearsal for my crush. Ah-ahaha-. I have to go now. Bye." She turned around and ran away. You, who saw her ran away, felt guilty as Onew gave up on her because of you.

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A/N: I decided! I'm gonna end this in another chapter instead. It can^^. Do check it out this Friday!

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Mahwiii
#1
Great story! :D
mushfu_
#2
The ending was so awesome!!! I love the last line.
charlenekyu #3
i'm onew bias .. :)
sunny-jjong new pairing ..haha
i love sunny as well :D
Ashyunchick20 #4
Hello hello! ~ Shinee dance ~ :P
I was wondering if you can check out my fanfic about Shinee!~ :D
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/128896/flower-boys-nerd-jonghyun-key-minho-onew-romance-shinee-taemin
Thanks!~ ^_^
Linny22 #5
I want a happy ending with Onew XD! I really enjoy it and look forward to the rest of the chapter! ^^
Mahwiii
#6
Idk who.. But umm happy ending plz! Am sry if am no help but anyway i like this story ><
jesslyn1234
#7
I updated Chapt 21^^
shinee53187
#8
HAPPY ENDING with ONEW .! it would be nice if Hyemin will end up to ONEW. u know haha ^^
mushfu_
#9
As I've been saying,<br />
ONEW ONEW ONEW ONEW ONEW ONEW!!!!!!!!<br />
and I want a happy ending!! (i'm a er for happy endings)