Chapter 11 part 1

You Were Right, I Was Wrong

HI! This chapter has to be quick because I have jazz band and then school! I am trying my best I mean it!

                                                                                                                                                                                          

"____. ____" I heard a sweet voice call.

"Hmm"

"Get up, We have to get going so we don't get stuck in traffic"

"What?" I opened my heavy eyes to see the face of my gorgeous bro-

Hold up! Did I just call my brother gorgeous? Since when has that happened?

"Yea come on!" He lifted my out of bed a threw me some clothes.

"Go change!"

Ok" I walked into the bathroom to change.

After I changed we were on our way to the mall. The whole day we spent and spent on everything and anything that would help me look 'better'.

My new hair ended up being a different style and I looked like this:

And my new outfit:

(I know it's anime! I just can't find what I'm looking for on the site i use!!!!)

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RainieLicia #1
Chapter 1: Before I start reading, can you write a summary of what it's about? Don't tell me she has a brother complex? What kind of story is it?
Brainwashbabe
#2
Chapter 1: Oh it's Risako sugaya & Momoko tsugunaga, Don't know why but I was so surprised to see them honestly. :) I'm so happy you used their pictures :)
seluglitter
#3
Chapter 24: Im so greatful that you took my comment on count :3 keep on writing, its going great :) She's gonna find herself... And well Jongin still loves her, he is just too slsssdbshd <3
seluglitter
#4
Chapter 22: Honestly... I used to love it. Now its... she's acting so weird, cocky, selfish, mean with Jongin and arrogant, that's not how she is. I know she wants to be accepted but please! how could she forget Jongin after a day, she has met Chin Ho for a ing day, and know she likes him.... please man! Jongin is a thousand times better. That's my mind.
leebs53 #5
Chapter 22: Your story is really good btw :)
leebs53 #6
Chapter 22: Kai needs to get back with her!!!!!!!
SungHyunBin
#7
Chapter 21: Why would you wanna change it? its good already T-T
LuHan2188
#8
Chapter 15: Ahhhhhhhhhh this is so cute I love them when they are together *if that even possible* :D

And your fic is Awesome Author-nim and I LOVE it so far don't worry :)))))
LuHan2188
#9
Chapter 13: You'er Welcome Author-nim :D

And I can't wait to the sequel ^^
Korneli406
#10
Chapter 10: All i can say is...HOLY CHIZ-WIZ JONGIN!!!!