I sent a request to AZIN PRODUCTIONS some time ago for a review on Season Changes. I'm even surprised at myself for doing that haha. It's my first time and I was so nervous lol.

Big thanks to Micah Angela Mangahis aka Ms.Mysterious Bug [my beloved reviewer] & AZIN [http://azinproductions.blogspot.com] for the review. <3

Here we go~

Title: 4/5
I like your title.For me,it really suit your story well but I just don't like the "+.+" sign beside your title.It somewhat irritates me.

Forewords: 1/10
Actually,I am disappointed with your forewords.You should have atleast described and introduced the characters of your story and how your story will flow.

Poster/Background: 3/10
Your poster and background looks quite boring.For me,the white and orange colors suits your story more.It will also make me read your story easier. Anyhow,I love Fahrenheit's picture[the one with solos].

Plot: 19/20
Your plot is great!Keep it up. I love every part of your story.Your story isn't finished yet but right now, I love BeBu's part!I love Jiro's part too but too disappointed with the ending:( As for chun,I was quite disappointed that her partner is Selina not with Ella because most of the time, chun is partnered with Ella.But as I said your story isn't finished YET so I will be waiting for it.I will be waiting for Calvin's part too!!!

Creativity/Originality: 10/10
Your story is very unique.I love how the story ends and starts.I am quite shocked to know that every Fahrenheit member had different story but they are all included in one story only![Did you get my point?..ehehe]That makes your story unique!!! [Author's note: Yes I get your point haha, thanks!]

Flow: 3/5
At first,I got somewhat bored reading your first and second chapter[?] but I got more interested when BeBu interactions started[on their story].Then,I got more curious on your story so yeah.I started to have fun reading your story:)

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 8/10
I have noticed that you have SOME wrong grammars and sometimes you have mispelled words.But it's alright because those errors can still be counted in fingers.I mean you only have few errors.You have written every chapter neatly:)

Characterization/Details: 10/10
I like your characterization here.Aaron being a mute.He does quite look like a quite person in the first glance right?Jiro who is always acting cool and Chun being a good boyfriend.Yeah,your characterization for me is perfect.

Writing Style: 7/10
I sometimes get dizzy reading your story because they are all bunched up in a long pharagraph.Even though you seldom use 'deep' words[which is what I am looking for in a story] you still made me satisfied reading your story.

Overall Enjoyment: 4/5
I enjoyed it very very much!It is full of ermm..surprises!

Sub Total: 85/100

Bonus: 3/5

Total: 88/100

*Hope you can update soon.I will be waiting for chun's ending!Good Luck~~

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88 is VERY high for me hahaha. I thought I would score lower but thanks for making me happy!! (:

I'm reading ths review again and see how I can improve my writing and present a better story to all. Sorry that I won't be changing my background or poster because I at making these things and I still like what Haheh did for me. (x But I'll try to improvise on other areas yeah? (:

Ah I wanted to write the next chapter this afternoon but there were some really annoying noises outside my home which totally interrupted my thoughts. I don't mind if they played their drums or whatsoever for 3-4 hours but it lasted the entire day and they're still making all that sounds now when it's already 9pm! Ugh. Anyways, Chun's story is ending soon! Please look forward to it as well as Calvin's one~! I haven't thought of the girl to pair him up with. Any suggestion?? (:

I really really love comments because they motivate me to write! (x

2.8.09