In the Bar

Meeting the Ex

Heyo,

Please comment and tell me what you think.

Sophie :P

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Taemin = 21

“Please Min?” I looked up to see a drunk and pouting Jongin. He was slumped against the back of the booth in their favourite bar and was at me to get him some more alcohol. Hunhan were also in the booth but were attached at the mouth as they made noises I could only describe as animals mating.

“Fine but don’t come running to me when you can’t function in the morning. You know Lay is going to push you tomorrow,” I sighed before heading to the bar and describing to order a sobering sprite for my boyfriend. I slipped onto one of the stalls before placing the order with the slightly overweight bartender.

Turning to the side, I decided to check back on the boys. As I turned, I halted as my heart stopped and my eyes popped out of my head. In the booth two down from ours, Minho was kissing Changmin, a singer Key’s boyfriend introduced me to at one of his annual bashes. He was a laugh and a friend but something stirred within me to see the two of them eating each other’s faces. I couldn’t help but stare as I drank in the scene. It made me angry to see Minho with someone else. He didn’t deserve to have someone else who he could blow off and leave broken hearted like he did me. I turned away before they would spot me as I snatched Jongin’s drink from the bar and stalked back to our booth. I may have purposefully walked right past the other couple’s booth though.

“Thank you baby,” Jongin giggled as he slurped the bubbly drink through a pink straw. Jongin then laid his head on my shoulder as he began to babble nonsense. My boyfriend, when he was drunk, lost all his manliness and turned into the cutest little boy I had ever seen. Either that or he was just incredibly .

“Kiss?” Jongin asked as he nuzzled into my neck and puckered his lips. I nodded before pecking him. I chuckled as he looked smug and stared at Sehun who was now staring blankly at one of the moving lights. I couldn’t help but laugh as I watched Jongin and his friends who were smashed. Luckily Sehun and Luhan had their own place together and so, being the dedicated driver I was, I didn’t have to explain to any parents what had happened. Suddenly a tap on my shoulder caught my attention.

“Tae!” I glanced up to see Changmin hanging off of Minho as he smiled at me and the people who were around me.

“Changming hyung!” I smiled meekly as Jongin threw his hand over my shoulder and glared at Minho. I chuckled before sliding from his grip and looking expectantly at the couple.

“Oh … this is Minho. Have you two met?” Changmin asked as he looked at Minho innocently. I opened my mouth to speak but was beaten.

“No, I don’t think so,” Minho spoke, cutting me off. I immediately looked at him with a puzzled expression. What?

“Um …”

“Maybe at a party of something?” Changmin asked as he looked at Minho. Minho only shrugged before slipping his arms further around Changmin’s waist and looking blankly at the others in the booth.

“They have! You broke his heart,” Jongin suddenly slurred as he jumped up and pointed an accusing finger at Minho.

“You must be mistaken,” Minho just replied nonchalantly before shrugging again. All the time I was eyeing him. It tore at my heart-strings just a little bit that he was ignoring me. I loved him once and he hurt me but I hadn’t forgotten him. Maybe something happened?

“NO!”

“Hey Jongin-ah … shhhh,” I stared at him lightly before looking back at Changmin and Minho. Something was bugging me. Where they together? Where they a thing? Or was it just a fling?

“Um … are you two … like … together?” I stuttered as I looked at the pair.

“Yup!” Changmin giggled before hugging Minho closer. I could feel the storm clouds forming over my head as I stared them down. Jealousy settled itself in the pit of my stomach as I eyed Minho’s hands on Changmin and how they caressed him. I used to be in Changmin’s place. I used to be the one that Minho held and showered with gifts and was sweet to and … loved. And now it was Changmin. He knew all about my problems and now he was dating the devil himself. I hadn’t told him it was Minho but I wanted to now as they hugged.

“Well … um …con-“ the words seemed to get stuck in my throat.

“Thanks.” Sensing the awkwardness, Changmin smiled before tugging at Minho’s hand. “We should go.”

“Bye hyung,” I forced a smile onto my face as I watched the two of them disappear into the crowd.

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It wasn’t until later that night when I was lying next to Jongin in his double bed that I realised I was, once again, being stupid. In the end, Minho was just a lying toad who was often mistaken for a sweet and innocent frog. Jongin, the cute little puppy that was next to me in deep slumber, was the one that really mattered. At the end of the day, he was the one that was waiting for me and he was the one that I wanted to wake up to in the morning. He was perfect.

“Hyung?” Suddenly my angel stirred. He groaned as he stretch and moved closer into my arms; snuggling into my body heat.

“Mmmmmmm?” I mumbled, not wanting to wake him further. “Love you,” his voice was muffled against my chest as he slipped into dreamland again.

“I love you too.”

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crazedanddazed #1
Chapter 29: ㅠㅠ Waaaaa.. It's the ending already.. ㅠㅠ
The final chappie was awesomely done. Kinda got emotional. Just beautiful.
And i think it's a good idea that you decided to end it. Fits the story well.
Gahhh. Gonna miss it. Been a pleasure reading the story.
Thank you dearie ♥ Keep on writing :)
Looking forward for more of your masterpieces!
TaeLovely
#2
Chapter 29: Aw~ that was beautiful. That was a perfect ending, wraps everything up nicely. And lol Chanyeol and BaekRis's kid? aww haha. Well everything ended well and im happy ^^

I also have a taekai fic~ well two but the second one is a Taemin/Sungjong (dont ask lol) with Kai as obsessed with Tae and im planning on putting a whole chap or two of pure taekai moments. The taekai i just started is pure taekai ^^

But, y'know, you dont have to read them cause they're probably not as good as yours.. >//<

Anywehs! great story author-nim! Good job (\^.^/)
TaeLovely
#3
Chapter 28: New reader here~! I love this story <3 However, as much as i hate to say it, i dont think there's much you can do without dragging it out. They're over their exes, they're engaged and happy, unless someone dies or cheats, I cant really see anything more. Maybe someone new enters the picture?

Dont get me wrong, I'd LOVE to see more fluff, but it seems like any possible drama would be redundent. Sorry if im being harsh!>.< Im really not trying to be, I love this story really <3 Author-nim, hwaiting!
Thepossessed2 #4
Chapter 28: You should finish this story I really enjoyed it
taekai69 #5
Chapter 28: I'm ok with everything as long as taekai in it ^^ <3
crazedanddazed #6
Chapter 28: Awwwww :'(
Hmmm i would definitely want you to continue this fic cuz i like it so much but if you think that there 's nothing going right currently then i guess you should just take your time off for some chill. Heee.
However, looking back at your fic now, i think that they have already gotten over their exes now right? So as much as i hate to say this, i think that you may also end the fic with maybe a few more chapters for closing. (ㅠ.ㅠ)
Unless you still wanna dwell some more in their past relationships that brought them to their current ones. Some angst or some jealousy idk. Haha.
Or you can just simply give them more romance and fluff until they puke unicorns and rainbows. Lol! Oh and maybe a valentine's day special? Haha.
Though i would be happy and grateful for whatever you gave us cuz i am so deprived of Taekai now. Lol.
Sorry for my long rambling. Just giving my thoughts. And plus i'm so bored now. Heee.
Krease99
#7
Chapter 28: Yes you should keep going! Fighting! ^^
And for what we want to see... I would like some fluff like baking something and being all cute and cuddly or something ^\\\^ (I'm in the fluffy mood right now xD) but I don't know, I hope you can get some inspiration! X3
I'll look forward to the next chapter! :D
taekai69 #8
Omg I hope it's taekai ><
Shineewifey
#9
Chapter 26: nuuuh ; n ; omehgosh this is like sooo good, i cried, laugh, sobbed, wanted to throw luhan out of the window during the first part if TorD. I SHALL WAIT FOR YOUR UPDATE ouo~!
N_Precious
#10
Chapter 26: Awww I'm glad they made up... My beautiful TAEKAI~^^ now.. What will Sehun do with luhan...