Confused II

We're Together

Dong Wan's POV

"Dong Wan...", I heard someone was calling for my name. I know that voice very well. It was the voice that i've missed so much for the whole time. Everyday, I heard the same voice was calling for me and that day it was no different. I know it was only my imagination but it felt real everytime. I turned my body to search for the voice, but when I saw his figure at the door, I quickly jumped from my bed. I got up from my bed and walked to him. I missed him too much making me imagining things. I thought it was only his illusion, projected by my brain because I was missing him too much. It happened every day since the day that lady came to my house. Thus, I approached my 'illussion'  and touched his beautiful cheeks before I hugged him tightly. I thought he would be gone, same like everyday after I hugged him, but this time, he hugged me back. I could feel he tightened the hug before he said,

"Wannie...I miss you...", he cried in my hug. His tears fell down on my shoulders, making me realise that it was not illussion. It was real. The real him was hugging me! When I finally sure that it was him, I quicky pulled away from the hug. I pushed him forward before taking a step back, startled by his presence. He grabbed my wrist and hold it tight. 

"Tell me, Wannie....Why are you ignoring me??", I heard him asking through his tears. I refused to answer it and kept quiet. 

"Wannie...", he called the name that I love. I covered my ears with my hands while shaking my head. NO!! I CAN'T LET HIM KNOW WHY I'M BEING LIKE THIS!!HE MUST GO TO HYE MI AND HIS CHILD!!HE CAN BE HAPPY WITH THAT!!NOT WITH ME!!!.......but, is that really true??....It was too confusing for me. I kept fighting with myself. He tried to hug me again, but I pushed him away. I want to run from all of this! I want him to be happy!! I got out from my room after he fell on the floor. I grabbed a jacket that was lying on the floor. He had got up and tried to keep me stay but I pushed him again and he fell for the second time. I speed up my movements and went downstairs. I did not care about my apartment tidiness. I just stepped whatever that were on the floor. By the time I was opening the door, wanted to get out from the apartment, there she was. Standing in front of my door, with her tears again. Before I got to say anything, she asked me,

"How is it going, Dong Wan-shi??Will Min Woo come back to me and take resposibilty to take care of this child??", again, I stepped back. This was unacceptable for me. In front of me there was she who asked about the favour, while behind me, there was Min Woo who finally reached downstairs. I did not know what to do anymore. My legs were refusing to move. I ony looked at both Hye Mi and Min Woo one by one for a few times. Obviously, they had frowned eyebrows. I was in the middle of them. Both of them were approaching me. Then, I felt that i was having a mental breakdown. I went blank. My brain did not want to work anymore.  All it could do was making me fainted in front both of them and gave me a black vision after I heard Min Woo said,

"Hye Mi??What the hell are you doing in Wannie's house??"

 

 

Author's note:Another chapter to go...Wish me luck~~Huhu...Sorry if I messed up...

but thank you for being patience....and thank you for reading and commenting~~ (^^,)

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MrsYooChun
#1
Chapter 8: JNP?? what does this mean??? :)
lunanegra #2
Chapter 29: Bwaha.. SuJu as their kids? OMG, they are having a very chaotic family.. ^^
MMM123 #3
Woodong in the bonus chapters was just wow :)
ayuwannie #4
Chapter 6: hahaha I began to feel the Jindy moment... But.....Sure, Woodong keep the best, love love love woodong so much :)
ayuwannie #5
Chapter 1: what I'm feeling right now is similar to what dongwan feel, what's this? I had to read the next chapter :)
TheLetterV
#6
Chapter 30: hahahaha you are just sooooo CUTE!!! ❤ (((o(//////Σ//////)o)))

and Dongwannie is my favorite out of Shinhwa members too!!
you are the first author I've met here that feels the same! \(*0*)/

~ WAAAHH . . .
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~ that's . . .
~ sooooo~~~ . . .
~ AWEEEESOME!!!! (((o(≧∇≦)o)))
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~ *high-five-sister!* └ (^○^)オ(^▽^)ツ~
TheLetterV
#7
Chapter 27: My...GODDD!!(✖////✖)~❤
WAAHH I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!! ヽ(///ヮ///)ノ heehhee

I've loved that you broke it with a funny scenario the end of it~ (although, I must say, YOU - ARE - SUCH - A - TEAAAAAAAAAASE ! ~ but) I've loved that so much ! kekeke ~ /// Eric's characterization is HILARIOUS! "MY BABY BIRD IS BEING BY YOUR BABY BIRD!!!" L-M-A-O ! <3 XD
and him being caught for peaking on the Woodong couple~~ wahhh that was so funny yet quite hot in a ert-ish way I can't even explain it ! waa~~~~hahahaha~~~~ヽ(*≧ヮ≦)ノ

Also, actually~ I hoped Jindy would've done it at the end~~... and I would've preferred if Andy wouldn't have turned all shy and stuff, although it's cute~ I actually love the 'aggressive Andy - submissive Jinnie'~ kekeke...~ maybe you could write like a sequel where they'll go all the way?? *blushing*-pwweeeease??-*BLUSHING* (((o(//////Σ//////)o)))

General overview: the segmentation to paragraphs is fantastically fit; the plot have a great and calm opening, a Y-and-HOT-AS-HELL middle section and a surprising and funny scenario at the end~~ great development for a one-shot(!).
Except a few grammar corrections (and the tiny unsatisfying feeling I have cus they didn't finish what they had started) every thing about this chapter is PERFECT! ・:*:・(*/////∇/////*)・:*:・
so I give you 9.8 out of 10 ! (slightly taken down cus of the little grammar mistakes)

From my perspective, you've done a great job writing this chapter. chincharo! *thumbs-up* d-(^ヮ^)
✧・゚:* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ❤ KUDOS AUTHOR-NIM! ヾ(*⌒ヮ⌒*)ゞ ❤ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *:・゚✧
TheLetterV
#8
Chapter 26: I know it's a late comment but I had much so I only got to read the last chapters now~~ OTL
aanyway~ reaaally cute chapter! Ricsyung were never my favorite pairing, and apart from that- I'm not into Ricsyung lately, YET I read the chapter because you wrote it really well and I liked the fluffy plot~ kekeke❤

only two things were a bit of a turn-off for me~ (๑•́ ω •̀๑"):
* Eric calling Hyesung "my husband and wife" ~ I wish you wouldn't have written the "wife" part.. it's just that-..Hyesung hates those kind of stuff, and he will never let Eric get away with it if he'll make him girly [no matter which way]~ hahaha ヽ(*≧ω≦)ノ
* I hoped that Dongwan, being the wit-GOD, apart from being entertaining and making the crowd laugh, would say a more emotional.. longer speech. with some beautiful memories of the two included that only the 6 of the members know about to share with the crowd (and through that with the reader) :/

Anyway, the chapter was written nicely. I also liked the Woodong moments in it very much; the hold each of them has on each other is always so beautiful and lovely~ (๑>◡<๑) ❤
You did a great job! chincharo (๑>ヮ-)~✌
MizzPeel0007 #9
Chapter 30: Oh so Min Woo planned the entire thing to get a honeymoon for he and Dong Wan sweet, but can you say jealously. Of your cute little son, well he did get a week to spend together,, loved the ending so much.